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Nice work on your character, really cool design. Only critique would be if you were going to use this for anything other then practice, such as a folio piece I would spruce up the platform he is standing on a little more. Even though it might not seem like that big of a deal, things like that really do add a lot to a finished render.
Also, the wrinkles on his pants need more attention paid to them. The pants look as though they are fairly close against the leg, but also look baggy at the same time. Don't add wrinkles in clothing for the sake of it, really think about where the material will fold and stretch. Areas around the crotch and knees usually stretch and crease the material, where as the base of the pants would normally cause the material to fold. Of course this all depends on the size of the pants, and the material it is made of, so gather lots of reference material when working with clothing.
Keep up the good work.
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