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    Hello Guys:

    My name is Jerónimo and I'm 45 years old (yes, posibly VERY old). That´s my new sketch. Please, be honest with it, I´ll be glad.

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      Default Self portrait: Jeromo in troubles.


      It's hard to be a daddy-drawer.

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      Essence of innocence and Daddy's hard task
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        Zentrope, thank you for the title!!

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        NP mate..
        Will be waiting for more updates...
        And your comic style is very Funny
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          ... till this night.



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              Hey those ain't bad, there's a potential comic drawin' line, the way you have laid down colors makes me think about markers and rough. You can raise the contrast in the colors, this will help to gain some strengh !
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                Merci Kherns. I'll try to rise the contrast.

                By the way, good job mate.
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                      i love the concepts in your drawings. so much humor. With that last one i think the lighting is bugging me a bit. The desk and room suggest a strong light from above/or ambient day light, but the character seems to be only lit from the front/bottom with this strong orange lighting. You could maybe light the desk/room/sky to imply an orange sunset to match the character more. But regardless as a drawing/picture its awesome. gave me a good laugh.
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                        C0nker3, thank you for your post. You´re right. The orange wasn´t the best colour, of course. ;-D.

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                          Keep raising the contrats and add some deep shadows, arund the desk'foreground, nice idea. Et Merci beaucoup au fait !
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                            Hey Kherns, thank you again.

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