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daniellee · 04-24-2012, 01:38 AM

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Wait, are you saying that you only just started your entire art journey this month? O_O

Thanks for the comment, Max

I started drawing digitally last year, and haven't done any studies before. So i decided to get more serious about art and start with study recently. I have wasted a lot of time, and hopefully i can be improved day by day.

JoseVega · 04-26-2012, 08:08 PM

hey danielle looks great.... the only thing i can think off right now is....
maybe try to have a range of values for the different parts.... like... if the value range is from 0 - 10.... u should not have all the pieces going from 0-10.... maybe have some from 3-8.... another ones from 7-10.... and so on.... this will make it look like is not all the same.
i hope i explained that right... lol

kevin- · 04-26-2012, 09:06 PM

nice studies, got any pencils? :b

daniellee · 04-27-2012, 12:53 PM

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Originally Posted by JoseVega

hey danielle looks great.... the only thing i can think off right now is....
maybe try to have a range of values for the different parts.... like... if the value range is from 0 - 10.... u should not have all the pieces going from 0-10.... maybe have some from 3-8.... another ones from 7-10.... and so on.... this will make it look like is not all the same.
i hope i explained that right... lol

Thanks man!!!!! it's really helpful, I must try to lower the contrast for sure!

paulhpaulino · 04-27-2012, 06:14 PM

Nice Studies, man!
Keep going

daniellee · 04-28-2012, 04:18 AM

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Originally Posted by paulhpaulino

Nice Studies, man!
Keep going

Thanks for the support

Kherns · 04-28-2012, 07:43 AM

Your going the right way on the two last pieces. I'm happy to see crits can help. For the bot you could even simplify the gun and use the lasso tool on it to have more straight parts, and simplify its own shapes. the same could be applied to your bot chest, to have a contrast between organic areas of the armor, and one more polish surface...which indeed would raise the lisibility of your design. Also his right arms is too clued to his torse, though I know you intented making what is called in jargon a shortcut. I kno what it is wana make some things like that to show own skills. It reminds me of some hideous I have done that were really worst than yours ( doesn't mean yours is bad by the way...It's just a fuckin' memory ) Keep it up. One antena on his head and you make an awesome asymetry. It's so easy to see what's up with others' stuff, than my own lol.....P.I.A !

daniellee · 02:19 PM

An portrait update from today. I'm totally suck at color!!! Is that because I'm afraid of using brighter color and saturated color? I have no idea... Can everyone help me out! pls..

daniellee · 05-01-2012, 02:15 PM

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Originally Posted by Kherns

Your going the right way on the two last pieces. I'm happy to see crits can help. For the bot you could even simplify the gun and use the lasso tool on it to have more straight parts, and simplify its own shapes. the same could be applied to your bot chest, to have a contrast between organic areas of the armor, and one more polish surface...which indeed would raise the lisibility of your design. Also his right arms is too clued to his torse, though I know you intented making what is called in jargon a shortcut. I kno what it is wana make some things like that to show own skills. It reminds me of some hideous I have done that were really worst than yours ( doesn't mean yours is bad by the way...It's just a fuckin' memory ) Keep it up. One antena on his head and you make an awesome asymetry. It's so easy to see what's up with others' stuff, than my own lol.....P.I.A !

Thank you for the crits, man!!!!

That's really what I need for now. I will update it later for sure

daniellee · 05-06-2012, 02:21 PM

Always wanna to do a knight study, and here my first try

Even I done a bit of studies, but I am having a hard time try to apply some techniques to my own work

Any suggestions?

kevin- · 05-06-2012, 02:29 PM

last knight study looks nice, could use a bit more contrast though. nice updates!

daniellee · 04:07 PM

Some black and white human portrait learnt from Min Yum. Trying to do some experiments with purely value and form study before I get better iwith color.

DaniMaRs · 05-13-2012, 04:00 PM

superb sketches

very realistic material(metal) of the armor

daniellee · 05-13-2012, 04:06 PM

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Originally Posted by kevin-

last knight study looks nice, could use a bit more contrast though. nice updates!

Thanks dude!!! I am glad haha!

daniellee · 05-20-2012, 12:47 PM

My whole study process was quite slow these days

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,015 Member My Mood: Thanks: 496 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	04-26-2012, 08:08 PM hey danielle looks great.... the only thing i can think off right now is.... maybe try to have a range of values for the different parts.... like... if the value range is from 0 - 10.... u should not have all the pieces going from 0-10.... maybe have some from 3-8.... another ones from 7-10.... and so on.... this will make it look like is not all the same. i hope i explained that right... lol __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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kevin- Join Date: Mar 2012 Posts: 544 Member Thanks: 170 Thanked 227 Times in 227 Posts	04-26-2012, 09:06 PM nice studies, got any pencils? :b __________________ Sketchbook Deviantart Cgsociety CA sketchbook Crimson Daggers

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Kherns Join Date: Sep 2011 Posts: 527 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 72 Thanked 280 Times in 276 Posts	04-28-2012, 07:43 AM Your going the right way on the two last pieces. I'm happy to see crits can help. For the bot you could even simplify the gun and use the lasso tool on it to have more straight parts, and simplify its own shapes. the same could be applied to your bot chest, to have a contrast between organic areas of the armor, and one more polish surface...which indeed would raise the lisibility of your design. Also his right arms is too clued to his torse, though I know you intented making what is called in jargon a shortcut. I kno what it is wana make some things like that to show own skills. It reminds me of some hideous I have done that were really worst than yours ( doesn't mean yours is bad by the way...It's just a fuckin' memory ) Keep it up. One antena on his head and you make an awesome asymetry. It's so easy to see what's up with others' stuff, than my own lol.....P.I.A ! __________________ http://mkherns.blogspot.com/ http://kherns.cghub.com/images/

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daniellee Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 40 Member Thanks: 14 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	05-01-2012, 02:13 PM An portrait update from today. I'm totally suck at color!!! Is that because I'm afraid of using brighter color and saturated color? I have no idea... Can everyone help me out! pls.. Last edited by daniellee; 05-01-2012 at 02:19 PM.

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daniellee Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 40 Member Thanks: 14 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	More studies~~ 05-06-2012, 02:21 PM Always wanna to do a knight study, and here my first try Even I done a bit of studies, but I am having a hard time try to apply some techniques to my own work Any suggestions?

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kevin- Join Date: Mar 2012 Posts: 544 Member Thanks: 170 Thanked 227 Times in 227 Posts	05-06-2012, 02:29 PM last knight study looks nice, could use a bit more contrast though. nice updates! __________________ Sketchbook Deviantart Cgsociety CA sketchbook Crimson Daggers

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daniellee Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 40 Member Thanks: 14 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Black and white 05-13-2012, 05:32 AM Some black and white human portrait learnt from Min Yum. Trying to do some experiments with purely value and form study before I get better iwith color. Last edited by daniellee; 05-13-2012 at 04:07 PM.

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DaniMaRs Join Date: Sep 2011 Posts: 35 Member My Mood: Thanks: 7 Thanked 10 Times in 7 Posts	05-13-2012, 04:00 PM superb sketches very realistic material(metal) of the armor

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daniellee Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 40 Member Thanks: 14 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Study again 05-20-2012, 12:47 PM My whole study process was quite slow these days