[metwins]

Hi guys.
i want to work on Sherlock Holmes.

[thebest]

Hello First time to enter this challenge and having fun already hope you like what I have so far , going to use a pipe and sherlock holmes hat in abit fun and stylized way
great work everyone

[Islipe3d]

[Intervain]

really inspiring to see more folks joining in

metwins - great start. Watch those corners of the eyes The skin wraps around the eyeball and doesn't leave big holes in the inner corners Also, your image looks like you're not using perspective while sculpting It's very risky, as you might end up with a rather fishy looking face Keep going though, it's coming along nicely

thebest - great start though I'm having trouble pinpointing what sort of an expression you're going for Is he surprised, scared or angry?

Islipe3d - nice to see you're going for a full body I'd try to do the collar of the jacket either modeled in completely in an outside 3d package like maya or whatever you're using rather than sculpt it on You could also just use z-spheres and quickly mock one up over the current jacket geometry. It would look much more natural... The sleeves look rather short too


Keep going folks

[arek]

Well I did a quick render test with zbrush. And I think I will try to make this work with zbrush alone. I wonder how it will work...


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[Intervain]

it's looking great arek One thing I'd look at are the eyes - he seems to be looking in opposite directions with his eyeballs at the moment It's hard to tell with this 3/4 view but the nose looks rather wide too ... I look forward to more - it's coming along wonderfully

[arek]

Your right Intervain, I will fix that along with face expression which for now is rather generic :/

[thebest]

Great Work Arek

Intervain : will I wanted to mix both anger and surprise in a bit of misterius way hope I succeeded in that

[sanketpro3d]

nice work folks,

thebest : i agree with intervain about the use of perspective. apart from that, i think the left eye lid has gone out of touch from the eyeball, its too far.. there should not be any gap and the eye lid shud wrap around the eye. also you have lifted the left nostril a bit up, but while doing that try to shift the tip of the nose a bit towards left too to give it actualy luk. and there is a perfectly straight horizontal line where the upper and the lower teeth meet, i think you can use some variation and also you'll have to keep them a bit opened so that he can hold the pipe. I'm not really sure about the cap, but waiting for more updates. keep em coming !

[sanketpro3d]

arek : your piece is luking good, intervain has already pointed out some things. waiting for updates

[thebest]

Thanks for the critiques but I think you were confused between two entries Intervain told metwins about that I do use Perspective while sculpting but for the other crits I think you are absolutely right

Originally Posted by sanketpro3d

nice work folks,

thebest : i agree with intervain about the use of perspective. apart from that, i think the left eye lid has gone out of touch from the eyeball, its too far.. there should not be any gap and the eye lid shud wrap around the eye. also you have lifted the left nostril a bit up, but while doing that try to shift the tip of the nose a bit towards left too to give it actualy luk. and there is a perfectly straight horizontal line where the upper and the lower teeth meet, i think you can use some variation and also you'll have to keep them a bit opened so that he can hold the pipe. I'm not really sure about the cap, but waiting for more updates. keep em coming !

[jorgepepelife]

Another preview of modeling,
now just need to add the pipe!

[Intervain]

great stuff guys

jorgepepelife - I'd suggest looking at the coat again - the stitch around the collar makes it look rather cheap and unfinished Sherlock would wear a nice tailored coat for sure

[Islipe3d]

intervain - Thanks for the tip.

[thebest]

jorgepepelife : Great Work he looks amazing
Islipe3d : he looks much better than before , but I think the hat is pretty thick

Not sure how many image I can post as a wip but I really wanted to take your opinion about this I updated my model as sanketpro3d suggested still not sure about the hat , different design ? remove it ? remodel it ?