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Ludwin · 04-07-2009, 09:06 AM

hey alexa!
nice poses for your final illustration.
i like the dynamics in them and the flowing lines.

AlexaSharlOt · 01:51 PM

Thanks Ludwin !

hmm, hmm I think that I finaly finish concept sheet

AlexaSharlOt · 02:34 PM

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garrymikedavid · 04-09-2009, 01:39 PM

Nice work Alexa!

Sweet concept, now it's just the model sheet and the beauty shot!

I wish I was this far, have to work harder!

Cheers,

Garry

Eclipse · 04-09-2009, 01:59 PM

She looks great! Very powerful and sexy at the same time. Fantastic work!

AlexaSharlOt · 04-09-2009, 07:15 PM

New update. I start to work on concept model and I have front view. Any yeah finally start working on illustration.

But is late in here and I need to have a good nigth sleep.
I hope she don't look dreadful.

So keep it up everyone.

garrymikedavid is ok I hope you will catch up soon.

Eclipse, thank i ddin't konw she looks powerful.

alphacentauri85 · 04-09-2009, 07:33 PM

I love the very intricate design of her armor/outfit.
The feathery-looking arm-things take away from the sleek visual effect though. I think I like better the more contoured metallic arm-guards.
It's also funny you gave her a magical snake, as I also did with my stalker design. Maybe they could be siblings? or from the same tribe? haha

deadred · 04-10-2009, 12:29 PM

wow beautifully done designs on her clothing/armor

I agree that the feathery forearm glove thing (near her elbows) kinda clash with the smooth flow of the rest of her design. perhaps make it so that the feathery things point down instead of up? like folded over sleeves, or maybe made of softer material so it does not all stick upwards.

AlexaSharlOt · 05:34 PM

deadred and alphacentauri85 thanks for advice it looked quiet funky.

Quote:

Maybe they could be siblings? or from the same tribe?

Maybe, maybe so

Now what are you thinking it is better ?! I like it how it looks now.

He, he you can see what I been planing on illustration

AlexaSharlOt · 04-22-2009, 05:48 PM

Hello there !!!

So new update. It would be nice for some critiques.

alphacentauri85 · 04-22-2009, 05:56 PM

Omg the sky looks amazing. Good stuff.
One crit is her feet. They don't look like they're neither supporting her weight nor hovering. Maybe it would be better if she's either fully hovering, or fully grounded. An easy fix is putting a rock (or skull, or machine part) under her right foot and flattening her left one a little closer to the ground.

Ludwin · 04-22-2009, 06:35 PM

hey alexa,

nice going! good composition, it holds the viewers (or at least my) attention, which is great!
is her hair going all wavy from strong wind, or from the roar/growl of the creature behind her? wavy hair always adds a lot of drama to an image, but be careful not to overdo it, or forget to make other elements react to wind or forces.
i'd make the movement of the hair a bit more random, but that's just me.
good luck!!

garrymikedavid · 04-23-2009, 09:58 PM

Hey Alexa!

I agree with alphacentauri85 on behalf of the feet. Other than that your beauty shot looks really captivating!

Cheers,

Garry

AlexaSharlOt · 04-28-2009, 04:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by alphacentauri85

Omg the sky looks amazing. Good stuff.
One crit is her feet. They don't look like they're neither supporting her weight nor hovering. Maybe it would be better if she's either fully hovering, or fully grounded. An easy fix is putting a rock (or skull, or machine part) under her right foot and flattening her left one a little closer to the ground.

Hey ! Thanks for the critique I change the foot little bit.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ludwin

hey alexa,

nice going! good composition, it holds the viewers (or at least my) attention, which is great!
is her hair going all wavy from strong wind, or from the roar/growl of the creature behind her? wavy hair always adds a lot of drama to an image, but be careful not to overdo it, or forget to make other elements react to wind or forces.
i'd make the movement of the hair a bit more random, but that's just me.
good luck!!

Is great that it make attention for someone.

Quote:

Originally Posted by garrymikedavid

Hey Alexa!

I agree with alphacentauri85 on behalf of the feet. Other than that your beauty shot looks really captivating!

Cheers,

Garry

Thanks Garry, I'm happy that you like pose

Ok, I have a problem what about the background, which is better ??? And some critiques would be nice to.

And thanks for support !!!

alphacentauri85 · 04-28-2009, 05:13 PM

I see where you're going with the new background, and it's certainly interesting and more war-like. But you know I love the old background, hands down.
Oh, and good job on the feet btw. Can't wait to see the finished version =D

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Ludwin Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 226 Member My Mood: Thanks: 17 Thanked 35 Times in 21 Posts	04-07-2009, 09:06 AM hey alexa! nice poses for your final illustration. i like the dynamics in them and the flowing lines.

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AlexaSharlOt Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 112 Member My Mood: Thanks: 2 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	04-07-2009, 09:39 AM Thanks Ludwin ! hmm, hmm I think that I finaly finish concept sheet Last edited by AlexaSharlOt; 04-07-2009 at 01:51 PM.

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garrymikedavid Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 199 Member Thanks: 11 Thanked 21 Times in 21 Posts	04-09-2009, 01:39 PM Nice work Alexa! Sweet concept, now it's just the model sheet and the beauty shot! I wish I was this far, have to work harder! Cheers, Garry __________________ Studio Kwibus Side Show Kwibusiness Sketchbook

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Eclipse Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 13 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	04-09-2009, 01:59 PM She looks great! Very powerful and sexy at the same time. Fantastic work!

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AlexaSharlOt Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 112 Member My Mood: Thanks: 2 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	04-09-2009, 07:15 PM New update. I start to work on concept model and I have front view. Any yeah finally start working on illustration. But is late in here and I need to have a good nigth sleep. I hope she don't look dreadful. So keep it up everyone. garrymikedavid is ok I hope you will catch up soon. Eclipse, thank i ddin't konw she looks powerful. __________________ ★★★Dominance War IV★★★

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alphacentauri85 Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 51 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	04-09-2009, 07:33 PM I love the very intricate design of her armor/outfit. The feathery-looking arm-things take away from the sleek visual effect though. I think I like better the more contoured metallic arm-guards. It's also funny you gave her a magical snake, as I also did with my stalker design. Maybe they could be siblings? or from the same tribe? haha

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deadred Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 34 Member My Mood: Thanks: 1 Thanked 5 Times in 3 Posts	04-10-2009, 12:29 PM wow beautifully done designs on her clothing/armor I agree that the feathery forearm glove thing (near her elbows) kinda clash with the smooth flow of the rest of her design. perhaps make it so that the feathery things point down instead of up? like folded over sleeves, or maybe made of softer material so it does not all stick upwards.

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AlexaSharlOt Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 112 Member My Mood: Thanks: 2 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	04-22-2009, 05:48 PM Hello there !!! So new update. It would be nice for some critiques. __________________ ★★★Dominance War IV★★★

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alphacentauri85 Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 51 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	04-22-2009, 05:56 PM Omg the sky looks amazing. Good stuff. One crit is her feet. They don't look like they're neither supporting her weight nor hovering. Maybe it would be better if she's either fully hovering, or fully grounded. An easy fix is putting a rock (or skull, or machine part) under her right foot and flattening her left one a little closer to the ground. __________________ break yourself, foo!

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Ludwin Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 226 Member My Mood: Thanks: 17 Thanked 35 Times in 21 Posts	04-22-2009, 06:35 PM hey alexa, nice going! good composition, it holds the viewers (or at least my) attention, which is great! is her hair going all wavy from strong wind, or from the roar/growl of the creature behind her? wavy hair always adds a lot of drama to an image, but be careful not to overdo it, or forget to make other elements react to wind or forces. i'd make the movement of the hair a bit more random, but that's just me. good luck!!

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garrymikedavid Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 199 Member Thanks: 11 Thanked 21 Times in 21 Posts	04-23-2009, 09:58 PM Hey Alexa! I agree with alphacentauri85 on behalf of the feet. Other than that your beauty shot looks really captivating! Cheers, Garry __________________ Studio Kwibus Side Show Kwibusiness Sketchbook

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alphacentauri85 Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 51 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	04-28-2009, 05:13 PM I see where you're going with the new background, and it's certainly interesting and more war-like. But you know I love the old background, hands down. Oh, and good job on the feet btw. Can't wait to see the finished version =D __________________ break yourself, foo!