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both of them!!
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here i am!
i made the changes at the first expression, and i worked on the depressed one.





tomorrow the last one
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great progress LOad I love the depressed one, lovely touch with the tears Try shutting her eyes a bit more and maybe making the corners of the mouth more rounded - like in this image: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_KsctDhqrAl...irl_crying.jpg - otherwise she looks almost mean and crying on purpose hehe, the open eyes sort of give her a calculating feel.
Not too sure about what you've done with the lips on the first one - they worked better in the previous version - while the eyes area works better in this one

Nikizar - yes try doing both But if you have to choose one, I'd say the second one shows more promise


Great stuff guys, very inspiring, keep it coming
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Thumbs up great progress


Load : the depressed version is really impressive, I would agree with intervain on the corners of the lips part for this version though... but still its luking pretty good already... and dont know for some reasons i think the smiling version can still use some work at the cheeks, probably little more lifting.

Nikizar : I'll also recommend both of them
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thank you guys! your feedback are realy helpful.
Intervain, it's great how you can find the little imperfection of an expression, i saw your works on the devil guy .. and wow! you're realy an expert!
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alright, i've just "finished" the last expression.
here the modified first two



and here the "Crazy Zombie-like" third expression , i love it hahaha
hope you like it guys!
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haha I love it, great job - I look forward to the final render.

C'mon everyone else hop in!
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    wow, Load, great expressions! Last one is the best))
    ok, trying to make the face look happy)
    not finished yet) Some advices would be helpful)
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    A very nice expression locki Perhaps a bit more wrinkling around the nose could help like in this picture: http://flavorwire.com/wp-content/upl...ughing_450.jpg

    Also the lower eyelid could be a bit more tucked under the upper one,especially around the outer corner .... I like the shape of the lips a lot
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    Exclamation !


    wow! very nice modeling guys! finally, character forge competition have a lot of participants! and btw I am modeling the fatman, so dont touch fattie, he is MINE!!!
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    thank you guys, i can't wait to see your entries!
    locki you're doing good! keep it up
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      thank you Intervain
      thanks LOad
      Here are a bit more tweaks)
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      very nice locki , I really like the expression now. Why not give hair some hair or hat to give the character more interest - or perhaps some earrings or tattoo on the head ... just a thought since there's still time. Or maybe another expression
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        Cheers Mag for the crit.
        Now ive just had a look at the jpeg ive made and noticed the crease around the norner of the mouth is a little high on mine.
        Any crits welcome
        nice work people. The girl with the spit! oh my!
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        Unhappy hi all ):


        hello guys ): here comes the evil happy fattie ): still wip, think Im going to remodel some areas in order to boost the expression. cheers
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