[LOad]

both of them!!

[LOad]

here i am!
i made the changes at the first expression, and i worked on the depressed one.





tomorrow the last one
cheers

[Intervain]

great progress LOad I love the depressed one, lovely touch with the tears Try shutting her eyes a bit more and maybe making the corners of the mouth more rounded - like in this image: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_KsctDhqrAl...irl_crying.jpg - otherwise she looks almost mean and crying on purpose hehe, the open eyes sort of give her a calculating feel.
Not too sure about what you've done with the lips on the first one - they worked better in the previous version - while the eyes area works better in this one

Nikizar - yes try doing both But if you have to choose one, I'd say the second one shows more promise


Great stuff guys, very inspiring, keep it coming

[sanketpro3d]

Load : the depressed version is really impressive, I would agree with intervain on the corners of the lips part for this version though... but still its luking pretty good already... and dont know for some reasons i think the smiling version can still use some work at the cheeks, probably little more lifting.

Nikizar : I'll also recommend both of them

[LOad]

thank you guys! your feedback are realy helpful.
Intervain, it's great how you can find the little imperfection of an expression, i saw your works on the devil guy .. and wow! you're realy an expert!

[LOad]

alright, i've just "finished" the last expression.
here the modified first two



and here the "Crazy Zombie-like" third expression , i love it hahaha
hope you like it guys!
cheers

[Intervain]

haha I love it, great job - I look forward to the final render.

C'mon everyone else hop in!

[locki]

wow, Load, great expressions! Last one is the best))
ok, trying to make the face look happy)
not finished yet) Some advices would be helpful)

[Intervain]

A very nice expression locki Perhaps a bit more wrinkling around the nose could help like in this picture: http://flavorwire.com/wp-content/upl...ughing_450.jpg

Also the lower eyelid could be a bit more tucked under the upper one,especially around the outer corner .... I like the shape of the lips a lot

[jnumber9]

wow! very nice modeling guys! finally, character forge competition have a lot of participants! and btw I am modeling the fatman, so dont touch fattie, he is MINE!!!

[LOad]

thank you guys, i can't wait to see your entries!
locki you're doing good! keep it up

[locki]

thank you Intervain
thanks LOad
Here are a bit more tweaks)

[Intervain]

very nice locki , I really like the expression now. Why not give hair some hair or hat to give the character more interest - or perhaps some earrings or tattoo on the head ... just a thought since there's still time. Or maybe another expression

[gingerrichd]

Cheers Mag for the crit.
Now ive just had a look at the jpeg ive made and noticed the crease around the norner of the mouth is a little high on mine.
Any crits welcome
nice work people. The girl with the spit! oh my!

[jnumber9]

hello guys ): here comes the evil happy fattie ): still wip, think Im going to remodel some areas in order to boost the expression. cheers