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    I have to agree with malo, I don't really see the form too well because he's almost one value. Just some cast shadows will not only help establish light but make him pop more. Otherwise, awesome attention to detail! It's just the right amount without going too overboard.
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    ty stace! yah im gonan try to make him pop more and work on the overall design as well.... thanks for your input
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      Nice designs mate, most of them are really accurate in form, too
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      hey xyphid im glad u like it! thanks for stopping by see u around!
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      just a quick wip of a portrait of a sith lord im working on for a personal project.... still too kinda early i still wanna add a few things to the design....
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      here is an update on the portrait.... still unsure if he is gonna be a sith or a jedi master... bllaahhhh!!! anyways...any cooments or critiques are always welcome.
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      Hey buddy,

      Looking GOOD so far!!! Just one lill' thing - (imo) the nostril are a bit of perspective.
      But that just my 2 cents
      looking forward to the next step!!

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      hey brother! thanks for stopping by. yah i do agree about the nostrils... i think im gonna do on a seperate piece of paper some studies for just noses and see if i can fix it for the next step.... noses are tricky! hehehehe thanks for the input man! appreciate it!
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        He's reading more of a sith to me than jedi! It's all in the eyes. The values are strong in this one.
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        hey stace! yah im making him definitely a sith.... trying to add some things to his design that will reflect that.... aggrhh so many things im working on at the same time cant finish one hahahahah.... that new drawing jam has me very interested! ill post another wip soon!
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        Ok so this guy has been around... he has his share of fighting exp. anyways.... another update! CC always welcome
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        here are some old sketches
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          Nice sketchbook.
          Keep it up, budy!

          P.S.
          Pay more attention to proportions.
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          hey thanks arpeich! yah proportions...ugrhhh :d........ will do thou!
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          Ok so here are some recent sketches after 4 days without power thanks to hurricane irene.... but back to normal! HERE WE GO!
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