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stace · 08-18-2011, 07:52 PM

I have to agree with malo, I don't really see the form too well because he's almost one value. Just some cast shadows will not only help establish light but make him pop more. Otherwise, awesome attention to detail! It's just the right amount without going too overboard.

JoseVega · 08-18-2011, 08:00 PM

ty stace! yah im gonan try to make him pop more and work on the overall design as well.... thanks for your input

xyphid · 08-19-2011, 08:27 PM

Nice designs mate, most of them are really accurate in form, too

JoseVega · 08-19-2011, 08:30 PM

hey xyphid im glad u like it! thanks for stopping by

see u around!

JoseVega · 08-23-2011, 02:18 AM

just a quick wip of a portrait of a sith lord im working on for a personal project.... still too kinda early i still wanna add a few things to the design....

JoseVega · 08-23-2011, 02:07 PM

here is an update on the portrait.... still unsure if he is gonna be a sith or a jedi master... bllaahhhh!!! anyways...any cooments or critiques are always welcome.
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malo · 08-23-2011, 02:10 PM

Hey buddy,

Looking GOOD so far!!! Just one lill' thing - (imo) the nostril are a bit of perspective.
But that just my 2 cents

looking forward to the next step!!

Cheers

JoseVega · 08-23-2011, 02:57 PM

hey brother! thanks for stopping by. yah i do agree about the nostrils... i think im gonna do on a seperate piece of paper some studies for just noses and see if i can fix it for the next step.... noses are tricky! hehehehe thanks for the input man! appreciate it!

stace · 08-25-2011, 05:19 AM

He's reading more of a sith to me than jedi! It's all in the eyes. The values are strong in this one.

JoseVega · 08-25-2011, 05:26 AM

hey stace! yah im making him definitely a sith.... trying to add some things to his design that will reflect that.... aggrhh so many things im working on at the same time cant finish one hahahahah.... that new drawing jam has me very interested!

ill post another wip soon!

JoseVega · 08-25-2011, 06:06 AM

Ok so this guy has been around... he has his share of fighting exp. anyways.... another update! CC always welcome
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JoseVega · 08-25-2011, 02:08 PM

here are some old sketches
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Arpeich · 08-25-2011, 02:52 PM

Nice sketchbook.
Keep it up, budy!

P.S.
Pay more attention to proportions.

JoseVega · 08-25-2011, 03:05 PM

hey thanks arpeich! yah proportions...ugrhhh :d........ will do thou!

JoseVega · 08-26-2011, 04:17 AM

Ok so here are some recent sketches after 4 days without power thanks to hurricane irene.... but back to normal! HERE WE GO!
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	Permalink #46
stace Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 647 Senior Member Thanks: 414 Thanked 382 Times in 351 Posts	08-18-2011, 07:52 PM I have to agree with malo, I don't really see the form too well because he's almost one value. Just some cast shadows will not only help establish light but make him pop more. Otherwise, awesome attention to detail! It's just the right amount without going too overboard. __________________ You should ALWAYS crit a girl! (sketchbook)

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,016 Moderator My Mood: Thanks: 496 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	08-18-2011, 08:00 PM ty stace! yah im gonan try to make him pop more and work on the overall design as well.... thanks for your input __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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xyphid Join Date: Apr 2011 Posts: 136 Member Thanks: 14 Thanked 66 Times in 63 Posts	08-19-2011, 08:27 PM Nice designs mate, most of them are really accurate in form, too

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,016 Moderator My Mood: Thanks: 496 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	08-19-2011, 08:30 PM hey xyphid im glad u like it! thanks for stopping by see u around! __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,016 Moderator My Mood: Thanks: 496 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	quick 08-23-2011, 02:18 AM just a quick wip of a portrait of a sith lord im working on for a personal project.... still too kinda early i still wanna add a few things to the design.... Attached Thumbnails __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,016 Moderator My Mood: Thanks: 496 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	update 08-23-2011, 02:07 PM here is an update on the portrait.... still unsure if he is gonna be a sith or a jedi master... bllaahhhh!!! anyways...any cooments or critiques are always welcome. __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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malo Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 2,981 Senior Member Thanks: 1,721 Thanked 1,859 Times in 1,558 Posts	08-23-2011, 02:10 PM Hey buddy, Looking GOOD so far!!! Just one lill' thing - (imo) the nostril are a bit of perspective. But that just my 2 cents looking forward to the next step!! Cheers __________________ malos sketchbook

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,016 Moderator My Mood: Thanks: 496 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	08-23-2011, 02:57 PM hey brother! thanks for stopping by. yah i do agree about the nostrils... i think im gonna do on a seperate piece of paper some studies for just noses and see if i can fix it for the next step.... noses are tricky! hehehehe thanks for the input man! appreciate it! __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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stace Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 647 Senior Member Thanks: 414 Thanked 382 Times in 351 Posts	08-25-2011, 05:19 AM He's reading more of a sith to me than jedi! It's all in the eyes. The values are strong in this one. __________________ You should ALWAYS crit a girl! (sketchbook)

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,016 Moderator My Mood: Thanks: 496 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	08-25-2011, 05:26 AM hey stace! yah im making him definitely a sith.... trying to add some things to his design that will reflect that.... aggrhh so many things im working on at the same time cant finish one hahahahah.... that new drawing jam has me very interested! ill post another wip soon! __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,016 Moderator My Mood: Thanks: 496 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	wip portrait 08-25-2011, 06:06 AM Ok so this guy has been around... he has his share of fighting exp. anyways.... another update! CC always welcome __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,016 Moderator My Mood: Thanks: 496 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	old sketches 08-25-2011, 02:08 PM here are some old sketches __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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Arpeich Join Date: Feb 2011 Posts: 85 Member Thanks: 3 Thanked 18 Times in 18 Posts	08-25-2011, 02:52 PM Nice sketchbook. Keep it up, budy! P.S. Pay more attention to proportions.

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,016 Moderator My Mood: Thanks: 496 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	08-25-2011, 03:05 PM hey thanks arpeich! yah proportions...ugrhhh :d........ will do thou! __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,016 Moderator My Mood: Thanks: 496 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	sketches 08-26-2011, 04:17 AM Ok so here are some recent sketches after 4 days without power thanks to hurricane irene.... but back to normal! HERE WE GO! __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com