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    06-14-2010, 12:35 PM

    Hey everyone this is my very first post on this website and I’m really excited to receive some feedback. I’m still in school and anxious about hearing everyones thoughts on my process for my Illustration Technology class.

    All of these sketches are from my process blog so if you want more information just head over there!

    www.jonathangirton.blogspot.com

    Thanks!
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      06-29-2010, 03:07 PM

      1st one i really like so simple so nice
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        07-01-2010, 10:18 PM

        I agree - I really like the first one a lot. It's very minimal, but it seems like it was done in a very deliberate way. The couch, plant and table all seem to converge at one point which creates a bit of a tangent, so maybe you could try spacing them a little differently and the couch kind of blends in with the wall color. Other than that, I really dig what you've got going on. The others are nice too, but I'm really loving the first one. It really reminds me a lot of some of the concept art I've seen for Pixar movies, so maybe you could check into that for some inspiration! Great work!

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