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    Default DogWalk Wip


    Hi there,
    I need to join this community! Need to get off my ass. It's hard to get into the swing of posting on a forum consistently. So I'm forcing myself to post a wip image here and hopefully get some good feedback. I promise to give some helpful feedback to other artists as well.
    Ok so here's what I'm up to. I'm trying to upgrade my portfolio with new work.
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      Update. Anybody, Feel free to give your criticism to this.
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        Here's the final.
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          hey nice piece you have here. One thing to consider when doing these character in a setting pieces is composition. Your figure is sitting smack dab in the middle of the page, which is ok for these kinds of things, but I think you could have made a more interesting layout with your her and her dogs. Just my 2cents,

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            Hey Sprogis, thanks for the tip! I'll have to try something different next time. On this one I tried to push the angle. I should think of composition more. I don't get many ideas in those regards especially since I always want to show some details on the character. I supposed nice a composition would have me hide some features. Thanks again=)
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              Np Man, just doing my part!


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