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12-18-2009, 10:15 PM
Composition: The dead guy in front works, it leads my eye in a lot better than an empty foreground, just may want to be careful that he doesn't take too much attention from the main scene. It also makes the original view, rather than flipped work better, for the flow. And also, as I understand it, the composition is more what dictates the reading/entrance of the eye, rather than left/right/normal reading.
Pose: Something about having the arm flung back like that just feels odd or unnatural to me, especially while running. It might make more sense if she was about to pounce and winding up, but since she's not striking at anything it just seems odd.
Colour: I like the blue green better, it might be because it fits the palette a bit better, or doesn't draw as much attention to the shield through contrast... or it might just be because I personally like them more. So take that as you will =)
Last thought: Bringing her closer to the viewer, even if it hides her legs a bit behind the guy or such, might be something to experiment with. Just to see what it does.
Be well =)
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12-21-2009, 04:44 PM
Hey Victor cool stuff you have here, the sketches with the faces are my favs. WiP is turning out good too.
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