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    I'm planning to paint over pgs 2 and 3, so there will only be two art styles.

    It's not uncommon, at least in manga, for a comic to start off in color and then go to black and white. I think it sucks too, but I can understand the reason for it.

    If a big enough following develops for XTIN I'd like to have it professionally colored. I don't get many comments but I've got a fair amount of thread views on a few forums, so I guess it could happen. It could just be people who stop in once and leave in disgust, but there's got to be a few people who are sticking with it.

    BTW, did you have much trouble with the story? Some people seem to get it but others are completely lost. I'll get better at writing with time.
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      Click on the little pic to get a big pic.
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                      This came out more humorous than intended. :~ I may have messed up the whole thing. But I think it's an accurate representation fo the way a spoiled kid would respond, so there must be a way this works. Truth can't be wrong.
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                          Final version of pg 25. I've made a bunch of small changes to the rest of the comic. Check them out at xtin.net.

                          I'm going to make a new cover and then issue 1 is done
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                            I'm going to clean up the original cover and use it for the issue 1 cover, and this can be the cover for the graphic novel and maybe a poster. I'd have a hard time coming up with an image that sums up the essence of XTIN as well as this one does.
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                                These definitions are simplistic, but people might get mad if they bought 5 pages of dictionary, so I kept it short and to the point.

                                Here's the revamped issue 1 cover -



                                (The image on the first page has updated too)


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