01-19-2013, 07:00 PM
The lighting in this is pretty dramatic, but the feel of it is a bit off. His face is almost completely obscured by the light, but we see her very clearly. I think you might have fallen into the trap where you don't want to put her into silhouette because of the work you've put in to render her, but the light is almost requiring it to feel the effect and mood. I think you need to play around with that, and her anatomy, as someone said above. It's getting there though, and your values on the guy are nice. It would be great to see some colour and background.