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    Default My new short movie : Aviation Dream (critiques needed )


    Hey all ... this short movie is based on a true story ..it's my first project ever after graduation .. it's a very low budged with a relatively small team based in Egypt ..
    .hope you like it ..

    i directed the movie ,also art directed ,did 50% of the illustrations,story boards and the story line .

    the style is inspired from the guild of wars trailers and also assassins creed movie .
    thanks for watching in advance.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L7HiV...&feature=share


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      A story of Mysterious Egypt? It seems great.I'm interested in Egypt a lot,the wisdom of Egypt's people always surprised me.
      Is it really a real story? Can you tell us about it?
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        the story is a true story of a scientist called Abas Ebn-Frnas ...a scientist in aerodynamics (he invented this science ) and also in many other fields ...he was the first to attempt flying in Andalusia .his story inspired my as he took the risk of jumping (a leap of faith ) and following his dream .he made 2 successful flights but fill on the last one giving him serious injuries that will leave him in pain for the rest of his life.he was the first to design the great dome with is a very realistic simulation of the earth,planets,moon,stars,wind and rain .that is a little brief of the story . .
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          Very beautiful art and story. The only problem I had was with the subtitles. Because the art work is very light in color, there are scenes where it is hard to read the subs. I suggest putting a very thin black border around the letters.
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            wow,moving and encouraging story,thx for sharing.
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              I didn't pay much attention to the story, but i like the art and how there were layers and animation. One minor thing was that the art was about 50 percent of the art needed better rendering.
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                Beautiful work. A very effective use of limited animation. Inspiring story.

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                  I think story is one of most important aspect of any movie. If you have not good story you can't do good or entertain more and more spectators.


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