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    Default WIP for this weeks 2D drawing jam, can I get a critique?


    The topic is Hounds of Hell. I just am sort of lost in details and could use some advice on where to take this to make it finalized. If anyone is up for it a paintover would be great, or anything else really.
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      Just consider the basics.

      I see the hind legs could be finished up. They're still somewhat of a blur.

      Also, the foreground, actual ground, can be made out a little clearer.

      The group of jack-o-lanterns could use something to give them move of a "huddled" feel.

      The howling wolf either needs to be left as a silhouette or a detailed part of the painting.

      Either way, make a choice and commit to it and finish him up.

      The piece looks near completion. I guess at some point you have to call it. I recommend at least finishing up the leg, ground and settle of the howling wolf. Good job so far. how long?


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