[ish]

I'm in a good place to start painting, I think. I wanted to post it and hopefully get some help from you awesome people before I continue.

It looks a bit off to me but I can't figure it out. I most likely need help with anatomy, weighting, proportions, but I don't know.

All help will be loved!
I'll keep posting my progress.

Thanks guys!

PS - sorry for the tiny image, I think it is big enough for what I'll need help with. xP

[aftertouch]

Hey, ish, great sketch! The only thing that looks kinda off to me are the legs. Something about the way they curve kind of throws me off a little, and the proportion of the lower legs to the upper legs seems a little too big, but that looks like it was intentional. Other than that, it looks great!
Keep up the good work!

[ish]

Thank you aftertouch!

Oh man, i guess i forgot about this thread.
Here's an update. It's like.. relatively finished so and and all critiques are absolutely loved!

[maculate]

Nice. I agree that the weight/perspective problem is in the legs, but the issue is that existence of the left leg (her right) isn't apparent enough. I can sort of see the heel, or a shadow of it, in the painted version, but that's still the weak point. You might be able fix it without actually altering the figure by putting down stronger shadows on the ground that clearly depict two legs. I can't guarantee this will solve it though, just what I would try first.

[ish]

Thanks, K I think I can see what you guys mean.
I'll play around with it a bit.

Besides the lack of foot, are the legs too thick? I don't know if that got somewhat fixed after painting but i tried. xP

[chrisdynasty]

wow love the style really beautiful good job

[GabrielMoon]

Wow ! Beautiful drawing,great.