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Lerathon · 06-21-2012, 07:58 AM

Hello everybody !
This is a work in progress character bust of an old man i'm working on, it's the first human i'm making, so any feedback is greatly appreciated

The base model is made in maya, then i took it into zbrush and added some details. then i polypainted + rendered in zbrush.

Thank you for your time.

Baldez · 06-21-2012, 02:29 PM

Hi Lerathon
I think that the overall is good.
But, the eye ball it's to much deep, you can see that very well on the left eye.
And you could give more attention on the lip area.
You are goin good.
And nice render by the way ;D

Lerathon · 06-21-2012, 05:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Baldez

Hi Lerathon
I think that the overall is good.
But, the eye ball it's to much deep, you can see that very well on the left eye.
And you could give more attention on the lip area.
You are goin good.
And nice render by the way ;D

Thank you for the awesome feedback, and for the kind words

i'm gonna try and move the eyes forward abit, and change the polypaint on the lip area(it's abit to sharp and abit to grayish atm)

Lerathon · 06-21-2012, 10:52 PM

Update on the bust,
I extended the mustasch to get a softer edge around the mouth, also added some small details on the lips
Next i pushed the eyes forward abit

and rerendered

Lerathon · 06-22-2012, 02:39 PM

Started working on a Shirt and a t-shirt for the bust

WIP image

biteny · 06-25-2012, 09:19 AM

Great character portrait,, you really have captured the spirit of the man!
Keep up the good work.

______
3D RENDERING

happyfish · 06-27-2012, 03:06 AM

I think that the overall is very good.Personally, I like best is part of the hair and beard, make very meticulous .
but i think the lip part is not a very natural .to touch is will be better .
come on!

Lerathon · 07-03-2012, 10:57 PM

#Biteny
Thank you so much

, im glad you liked it

#Happyfish
Thank you

, and yaa im really happy how the hair/beard came out.. i have added multiple layers of fibers to get a better thickness and multiple colors

, and thank you for the input about the lips, i will try my best and fix them :P

here is a new WIP, i have had quite alot to do with school but, i have started working on making a full body for the man

Lerathon · 07-27-2012, 12:48 PM

New update on the model

Lerathon · 10-21-2012, 10:38 AM

New update on the Old man,
Critique is more then welcome

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Lerathon Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 13 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	W.I.P Character bust Old Man 06-21-2012, 07:58 AM Hello everybody ! This is a work in progress character bust of an old man i'm working on, it's the first human i'm making, so any feedback is greatly appreciated The base model is made in maya, then i took it into zbrush and added some details. then i polypainted + rendered in zbrush. Thank you for your time. Attached Thumbnails

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Baldez Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 32 Member My Mood: Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	06-21-2012, 02:29 PM Hi Lerathon I think that the overall is good. But, the eye ball it's to much deep, you can see that very well on the left eye. And you could give more attention on the lip area. You are goin good. And nice render by the way ;D

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Lerathon Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 13 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	06-21-2012, 10:52 PM Update on the bust, I extended the mustasch to get a softer edge around the mouth, also added some small details on the lips Next i pushed the eyes forward abit and rerendered Attached Thumbnails

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Lerathon Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 13 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	06-22-2012, 02:39 PM Started working on a Shirt and a t-shirt for the bust WIP image Attached Thumbnails

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biteny Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 61 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts	06-25-2012, 09:19 AM Great character portrait,, you really have captured the spirit of the man! Keep up the good work. ______ *3D RENDERING*

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happyfish Join Date: Jun 2012 Posts: 107 Senior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts	personal assessment 06-27-2012, 03:06 AM I think that the overall is very good.Personally, I like best is part of the hair and beard, make very meticulous . but i think the lip part is not a very natural .to touch is will be better . come on! __________________ Happy life can't apply colours to a drawing of the render farm !

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Lerathon Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 13 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	07-03-2012, 10:57 PM #Biteny Thank you so much , im glad you liked it #Happyfish Thank you , and yaa im really happy how the hair/beard came out.. i have added multiple layers of fibers to get a better thickness and multiple colors , and thank you for the input about the lips, i will try my best and fix them :P here is a new WIP, i have had quite alot to do with school but, i have started working on making a full body for the man Attached Thumbnails

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Lerathon Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 13 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	07-27-2012, 12:48 PM New update on the model Attached Thumbnails

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Lerathon Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 13 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	10-21-2012, 10:38 AM New update on the Old man, Critique is more then welcome

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