[Stutts]

Hello everyone!

I have been working on this guy and I am just about finished with him. He still needs to be posed and I need to get rid of his blank stare. The final image will be of him coming out onto his front porch to get his Sunday newspaper. Let me know what you guys think of him so far and let me know where you think I can improve on this guy and the scene.









it's all still very work in progress so let me know what you think

[Lerathon]

I can't see your renders :/
permission error from google .. uhhmm try and attach it to your post instead :P

[Stutts]

sorry fixed the images

[Stutts]

here is an update made the lighting brighter finished texturing the back ground and adjusted some of the shaders on the imp I am going to wait until he is posed and I have figured out the camera angle before I model anymore on the interior. the glass in the render is really grainy because I turned the samples down just so that it would render faster. The third image was just me testing the dof settings on the camera and I thought it looked cool

[vertexangel]

This is looking good Josh, I think the eyes need a little bit of work on the shaders, they need to look more wet, check your specular and reflections.

The other thing that kinda bother me a little is how the muscles seemed to be kinda outlined, specifically the chest and deltoids. maybe that's from an ao pass or maybe painted but imho it is too strong.

[Stutts]

hey thanks angel yeah I have been messing with that AO pass I may get rid of it all together and i will definitely be working more on the eyes

[Stutts]

Ok So I am calling this guy done for know but please feel free to give me any crits and I may come back to them and make changes thanks for looking

[amileduan]

Your character seems so funny,he must be ugly but kind-hearted guy.Renders are also beautiful!

[vertexangel]

Hi Josh, I see that you revised the Ao pass, looks better now, the eyes look better as well. I think what you can improve now is the lighting and materials, specially the dark frames and the door mat; they are almost black. Then the beige of the wall is blown out so is the glass of the windows.

Looking good man.

[Stutts]

hey angel thanks for stopping in again I agree all that stuff was pretty quickly thrown in so I am going to go back and work on that stuff these renders I am posting today are done in a linear workflow and I think the lighting is coming along alot better


so based on some feedback from over on cgfeedback I am working on developing the textures some more so here is where I am at with this so far, I would like to know to know which you guys prefer the warm skin tone or the cool skin tone




Thanks for looking and thanks for your input

[Stutts]

Ok I had some time to come back to this guy and make some changes and I think it is time to call him done and move on



and here are some turnarounds of him



Thanks for looking

[ThreeDMadness]

Cute monster, love it