[fydbac]

Hello all!

Did these for an Art-test for a game company job: Long story short, they wanted to see the characters anatomy, and these are what I did. The Orange was something I did later, but before he replied to the first.

I failed: devastatingly, as far as I'm concerned from the reply.

Now I'm looking for critique on the anatomy of these pics, so I can try to understand my flaws and improve properly (they just said "odd shapes and twists", so I politely asked for some clarification). They are only SLIGHTLY changed from the original I sent him (different hair and barely bigger head), so it's practically the same. I'm just looking for other input while I wait for their reply

I don't understand what was wrong; so I'm turning to forums I know that'll give it to me straight. So, besides any natural anomalies that can appear in the human form, do you see anything out of place as a whole?

[fydbac]

Thanks to feedback on DA by a http://nicknightshade.deviantart.com/ on the refined-sketch, I've revised the arms, hips, and refined the back a bit more.

Again, All input is appreciated!