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MrMiller · 08:35 PM

So this is my first attempt at a human model, I need any crititque, especially for the anatomy because im not very good with it

Thanks

http://www.flickr.com/photos/68988003@N08/

jtsui · 10-26-2011, 03:30 AM

Not bad for a first attempt!

I think the torso can use a little more work. Right now the torso tapers down to a point, but if you look at male torso references, after the waist the hips taper outwards to fit in the pelvis.

I also get the sense that the biceps are a little short, therefore making the whole arm short in general. The hands look a little small as well. Usually the length of the hand from palm to middle finger is the length from the chin to the middle of your forehead, I think.

Keep up the good work! Looking forward to more WIP images!

juliakt38 · 10-26-2011, 11:26 AM

The upper arms seem too short compare to the lower arm.
The pelvis area is small compare to the size of the body.
the jaw area below the ears has a weird concave... is that intentional?

flie22 · 10-27-2011, 08:38 PM

The hand seems small. Maybe make it bigger little bit and add little bit of length. The Pelvis need to be wider.

psimmons · 10-28-2011, 07:23 PM

http://www.posemaniacs.com/

I like to use this site for human reference, it may help.

BoneFX · 11-01-2011, 08:54 PM

awesome website!! thanks for the poses simmons!

MrMiller: One thing I can see, is where the hips indent into the body, that should probably be higher up his torso. Generally your hips are the wider part of your midsection and the place where your torso indents is up around your belly button.

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MrMiller Join Date: Oct 2011 Posts: 6 Junior Member Thanks: 3 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Deadpool Character Model 10-25-2011, 08:30 PM So this is my first attempt at a human model, I need any crititque, especially for the anatomy because im not very good with it Thanks http://www.flickr.com/photos/68988003@N08/ Last edited by MrMiller; 10-25-2011 at 08:35 PM. Reason: images didn't work

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jtsui Join Date: Oct 2011 Posts: 6 Junior Member Thanks: 3 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	10-26-2011, 03:30 AM Not bad for a first attempt! I think the torso can use a little more work. Right now the torso tapers down to a point, but if you look at male torso references, after the waist the hips taper outwards to fit in the pelvis. I also get the sense that the biceps are a little short, therefore making the whole arm short in general. The hands look a little small as well. Usually the length of the hand from palm to middle finger is the length from the chin to the middle of your forehead, I think. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to more WIP images!

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juliakt38 Join Date: Oct 2011 Posts: 7 Junior Member Thanks: 2 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	10-26-2011, 11:26 AM The upper arms seem too short compare to the lower arm. The pelvis area is small compare to the size of the body. the jaw area below the ears has a weird concave... is that intentional?

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flie22 Join Date: Oct 2011 Posts: 3 Junior Member Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	10-27-2011, 08:38 PM The hand seems small. Maybe make it bigger little bit and add little bit of length. The Pelvis need to be wider.

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psimmons Join Date: Oct 2011 Posts: 8 Junior Member Thanks: 1 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	10-28-2011, 07:23 PM http://www.posemaniacs.com/ I like to use this site for human reference, it may help.

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BoneFX Join Date: Oct 2011 Posts: 3 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	11-01-2011, 08:54 PM awesome website!! thanks for the poses simmons! MrMiller: One thing I can see, is where the hips indent into the body, that should probably be higher up his torso. Generally your hips are the wider part of your midsection and the place where your torso indents is up around your belly button.

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