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    So I read the pages from the first page of the thread. I skimmed through the rest just to see how far it was going (Dont worry, I'll go back) I think you got a great experiment here. Yea, it is a bit confusing at first, but I think as the story progresses things will get clear. It's actually a lot like something you'd read off Heavy Metal magazine.

    It's actually good that the styles change. I mean, it's great to show off and do your best, but if you feel you can produce more with ease on a certain style, do it. I actually enjoy the black and white pages, from what I see.

    Granted if you were to take this to a publisher, you'd probably have to be a bit more clear on giving a back story and explaining the world. Other than that, I like it. The cover samples are eye-catching. I'd buy this if it was on the shelf.
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      Back to line art, painting taking too long again. Meh. The line art looks good too.

      Lusvell - Thanks! I hear Heavy Metal all the time. I signed up for their forum, and will post there, maybe pick up few more fans anyway.
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            One more page and the O'keepa will be over, then a few more and this scene will be done.
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              I've started running old concept art as a vote incentive, so if you want to see it click the button -



              Anyway that brings the O'keepa to an end. Poor High Priestess, looks like she did it for nothing.
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                New vote incentive if you're interested . . .
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                  One more page and this scene is finished.

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