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    Hi, so I made this little comic, would love to hear what you think

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      Nice work! Did it really happen or was it just a dream? Very atmospheric with the alien in the mist and fog. Not so sure about the comic sans. Hand lettering would probably suit your style better.
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        That was wonderful.
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          @Brogie Thanks, and yes I totally agree about the font, I will try and find a better one, that looks more like handwriting. It is up to you to decide if it was a dream or not

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            Such an entertaining read. I like the way how the story progresses and I like the ending as well. Also, the artwork is impressive. This reminds me of U2's music video for I'll go crazy if I don't go crazy tonight. Thanks for sharing!

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              wonderfull story.maybe u need to alter lightning for outside at night as in panel where boy are sleeping,it is nice contrast between blue an yellow.star guy looks bit creepy.
              nice style,
              regards,andreas


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