I'm new here, but the place looks chock full of talent and I look forward to meeting you guys.
I've been tossing around an idea for this kinda space comic. I was hoping to get some feedback if anyone cared. Specifically on the storytelling and colors. But anything that helps.
This little blue card thing is very important to the story. Like, the entire plot revolves around these cards, so I wanted to make sure to illustrate clearly how they work. Hence the reason I dedicate an entire page to this dude basically pushing a button.
I'm currently reworking page 3, a lot of people seem to have trouble telling what is going on, so I gotta get that fixed. Any advice would be loved though, thanks again.
Also, here is a ref for the alien and how it compares to humans. I wanted them to be more lanky, kinda hunched backed, or arch backed I guess. Like they're shrugging all the time.