[Lalilulelo]

For the past couple of years my friends and I have been working on a comic book. We published the first issue but we ran out of money and our now posting it online. We've completed 5 issues and I'm currently doing the layouts for issue 6. The website is http://the-stronghold.net I would like to get any and all the feedback I can about my most recent work on it, as far back as issue 4 (Issue 3 and back are at least 2 years old). However, I'll post work from issue 5 here. Likes, dislikes, what's working, what needs work -all greatly appreciated, guys.

[ZombieFrog]

lot of work,respect,but it feels sometimes like values in pannels are tho week,or not defined as well,so whole sheet going like mad color madness.
at b/w stuff you can see it well,eye have no idea where it must stop,so it goes crazy.
6-8 are awesome,but the same,tho much details without any focus,reader doN't know what he should look at.
for this purpose there is a simple trick,plan values with gray,set focus and use much color on focus,and lead viewers look trough page.
it makes less work too
regards,Andreas