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FilipZ · 05-25-2011, 10:55 AM

Hi, I will dump some of my sketches and finished work here. All feedback is greatly appreciated. Trying to bounce my stuff of others as I don't do that often enough... Thanks!

FilipZ · 05-25-2011, 10:59 AM

quick 20min sketch done this morning, looking at art cover for Souls of Mischief. Using wacom bamboo one coz I am at work...

FilipZ · 05-25-2011, 11:08 AM

I am struggling with this one. At some point I thought I got it and can call it finished but then started noticing things and digging away so I might have lost the hard line - soft line balance. Up for comments, please

FilipZ · 05-26-2011, 08:47 AM

Sketched with a ball-pen on the tube, colours added with textured brochures when I got to work. I want to make it a habbit with these quick morning jobs

FilipZ · 05-27-2011, 08:55 AM

This one is a WIP, not something I did this morning. I got to work too late and did not have time to scan...

FilipZ · 05-27-2011, 05:45 PM

Ok, this is the one from this morning, coloured over lunchtime.

asahiart · 05-27-2011, 06:18 PM

Last one is pretty cool could work well with a bit of refinment ^^

FilipZ · 05-27-2011, 06:50 PM

Thanks, mate. I worked it up a little more in sketchbook with pencil and I am getting a better feeling, from it now.
Appreciate you dropping by!

FilipZ · 05-28-2011, 10:30 AM

I drew this last night with the letraset markers (on the left) and coloured in photoshop. I think there's some quality potential to this one. I am thinking of expanding the background and adding some urban slum elements to add a little story to the picture, opinions welcome.

FilipZ · 05-29-2011, 11:11 AM

Decided to change the dude's features to more warthoggy ones...

asahiart · 05-29-2011, 11:24 AM

hoo no i loved your previous version , there was just a bit of refining to do on the shoulder part as it was a focus point, and some light enhancement to fit with the light coming on the face ( cf small quick paintover )

FilipZ · 05-29-2011, 12:10 PM

Really? Not that I want to attach myself to any work, but what's wrong with this one? . I wanted to go for a little more interest on the face rather than the generic "focused and ill-willed" expression. And thought that adding a few bits and pieces will help that...

Thanks for your feedback, dude - I really appreciate it!
(I've corrected the lightning a little bit)

asahiart · 05-29-2011, 03:08 PM

i did prefer the previous i think tehre was more interaction with the spectator , like he is about to tell us some clues about something , or tell a story ,i dunno it wa smore like we/spectator are inside the pic

my thoughts ^^

FilipZ · 05-29-2011, 09:52 PM

So I've tried to find a middle ground and this is what I came up with

FilipZ · 05-30-2011, 10:49 AM

This is an illustration I did for an online magazine. The article was about New Zealand's rugby team and former captain Tana Umaga

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FilipZ Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 126 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 44 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts	Bits and pieces 05-25-2011, 10:55 AM Hi, I will dump some of my sketches and finished work here. All feedback is greatly appreciated. Trying to bounce my stuff of others as I don't do that often enough... Thanks!

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FilipZ Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 126 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 44 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts	Head 05-25-2011, 10:59 AM quick 20min sketch done this morning, looking at art cover for Souls of Mischief. Using wacom bamboo one coz I am at work...

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FilipZ Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 126 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 44 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts	Puffed up 05-25-2011, 11:08 AM I am struggling with this one. At some point I thought I got it and can call it finished but then started noticing things and digging away so I might have lost the hard line - soft line balance. Up for comments, please

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FilipZ Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 126 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 44 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts	Soldier-trooper-whatever 05-26-2011, 08:47 AM Sketched with a ball-pen on the tube, colours added with textured brochures when I got to work. I want to make it a habbit with these quick morning jobs

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FilipZ Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 126 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 44 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts	05-27-2011, 08:55 AM This one is a WIP, not something I did this morning. I got to work too late and did not have time to scan...

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FilipZ Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 126 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 44 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts	05-27-2011, 05:45 PM Ok, this is the one from this morning, coloured over lunchtime.

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asahiart Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 152 Member Thanks: 18 Thanked 70 Times in 60 Posts	05-27-2011, 06:18 PM Last one is pretty cool could work well with a bit of refinment ^^

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FilipZ Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 126 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 44 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts	05-27-2011, 06:50 PM Thanks, mate. I worked it up a little more in sketchbook with pencil and I am getting a better feeling, from it now. Appreciate you dropping by!

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FilipZ Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 126 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 44 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts	Mecha cop, concept 05-28-2011, 10:30 AM I drew this last night with the letraset markers (on the left) and coloured in photoshop. I think there's some quality potential to this one. I am thinking of expanding the background and adding some urban slum elements to add a little story to the picture, opinions welcome.

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FilipZ Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 126 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 44 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts	puffing warrior - continued 05-29-2011, 11:11 AM Decided to change the dude's features to more warthoggy ones...

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asahiart Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 152 Member Thanks: 18 Thanked 70 Times in 60 Posts	05-29-2011, 11:24 AM hoo no i loved your previous version , there was just a bit of refining to do on the shoulder part as it was a focus point, and some light enhancement to fit with the light coming on the face ( cf small quick paintover ) Attached Thumbnails

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FilipZ Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 126 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 44 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts	05-29-2011, 12:10 PM Really? Not that I want to attach myself to any work, but what's wrong with this one? . I wanted to go for a little more interest on the face rather than the generic "focused and ill-willed" expression. And thought that adding a few bits and pieces will help that... Thanks for your feedback, dude - I really appreciate it! (I've corrected the lightning a little bit)

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asahiart Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 152 Member Thanks: 18 Thanked 70 Times in 60 Posts	05-29-2011, 03:08 PM i did prefer the previous i think tehre was more interaction with the spectator , like he is about to tell us some clues about something , or tell a story ,i dunno it wa smore like we/spectator are inside the pic my thoughts ^^

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FilipZ Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 126 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 44 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts	05-29-2011, 09:52 PM So I've tried to find a middle ground and this is what I came up with

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FilipZ Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 126 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 44 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts	Tana Umaga - illustration 05-30-2011, 10:49 AM This is an illustration I did for an online magazine. The article was about New Zealand's rugby team and former captain Tana Umaga