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JoseVega · 05-17-2011, 02:30 PM

hey kaydel.... looks cool, very clean... i cant wait to see where you go from there. see u around!

JoseVega · 05-17-2011, 03:17 PM

another little update.... any comments or critiques are welcome.

kemalgunel · 05-17-2011, 08:09 PM

hey and hello all

today i drew a new sketch, i hope its gonna be done before the deadline. Good luck all.

JoseVega · 05-17-2011, 08:17 PM

hey kemalgunel. is looking good. im curious about how you gonna color it. and what your gonna do about that portal on the top.
keep it up.

kemalgunel · 05-17-2011, 08:41 PM

s�priz my friend

JoseVega · 05-17-2011, 09:48 PM

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Originally Posted by kemalgunel

s�priz my friend

im guessing that means.... "surprise" ??

kemalgunel · 05-17-2011, 09:51 PM

yes in my language

JoseVega · 05-17-2011, 10:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kemalgunel

yes in my language

what language is it?

kemalgunel · 05-17-2011, 10:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by cheo36

what language is it?

its Turkish

kittensoft · 05-17-2011, 11:07 PM

Here's my latest...think it's almost done, anyone have any tips/things I can improve?

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JoseVega · 05-18-2011, 12:41 AM

HEY kittensoft... these are my suggestion. You still got some time left before the deadline and im no professional but ill try to help

-Try using texture brushes specially for things that are very textured like rocks, etc.... you could find some online for free or even make them
- I ll add a little more of contrast... i see there is a powerful source of light, so the more light there is the darker the shadows but then you might wanna add different sources of lights so you dont end up with too much shadows or too dark.
- try mixing up the shapes of those rocks, right now they all look the same, maybe have some that are smaller different shapes, some broken... that will add more detail and story to ur image.
-i like that u have little krystals and different sizes and angles of them around.

keep it up, keep working on it, keep giving it love.
hope that helps!

kittensoft · 05-18-2011, 01:32 AM

Thanks! I'll give your suggestions a try, I should definitely have enough time

JoseVega · 05-18-2011, 04:16 AM

agrh my mind is tired and i feel stuck with this one.... i think its beacuse its late!!!
please CC....any ideas?

choo · 05-18-2011, 06:07 AM

Gentlemen and ladies, I am reserving a wee spot here for another block of crits.

Shall be posted tomorrow morning/afternoon )

ScalC · 05-18-2011, 11:02 AM

Nice work everyone.

@ kemalgunel: I would love to see this one in color
@ kittensoft : Nice idea. I think you should work a bit more on the lighting. try to put cast shadows.
@ cheo36 : Nice work. I'm sorry to say that but i think the version you've posted Yesterday, 03:17 PM works better than your last one. Less symmetrical, more textured. Try to find a mix between those two version maybe.
Keep going

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,016 Moderator My Mood: Thanks: 498 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	hey! 05-17-2011, 02:30 PM hey kaydel.... looks cool, very clean... i cant wait to see where you go from there. see u around!

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,016 Moderator My Mood: Thanks: 498 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	wip 05-17-2011, 03:17 PM another little update.... any comments or critiques are welcome. Attached Thumbnails __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,016 Moderator My Mood: Thanks: 498 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	hey! 05-17-2011, 08:17 PM hey kemalgunel. is looking good. im curious about how you gonna color it. and what your gonna do about that portal on the top. keep it up. __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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kemalgunel Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 23 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 16 Times in 15 Posts	05-17-2011, 08:41 PM s�priz my friend

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kittensoft Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 39 Member Thanks: 12 Thanked 25 Times in 16 Posts	05-17-2011, 11:07 PM Here's my latest...think it's almost done, anyone have any tips/things I can improve? __________________ Deviantart: http://kittensoft.deviantart.com Facebook art page: http://www.facebook.com/pages/Tina-O...52741924788060

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,016 Moderator My Mood: Thanks: 498 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	hey kittensoft 05-18-2011, 12:41 AM HEY kittensoft... these are my suggestion. You still got some time left before the deadline and im no professional but ill try to help -Try using texture brushes specially for things that are very textured like rocks, etc.... you could find some online for free or even make them - I ll add a little more of contrast... i see there is a powerful source of light, so the more light there is the darker the shadows but then you might wanna add different sources of lights so you dont end up with too much shadows or too dark. - try mixing up the shapes of those rocks, right now they all look the same, maybe have some that are smaller different shapes, some broken... that will add more detail and story to ur image. -i like that u have little krystals and different sizes and angles of them around. keep it up, keep working on it, keep giving it love. hope that helps! __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,016 Moderator My Mood: Thanks: 498 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	agrhh 05-18-2011, 04:16 AM agrh my mind is tired and i feel stuck with this one.... i think its beacuse its late!!! please CC....any ideas? Attached Thumbnails __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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ScalC Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 301 Member My Mood: Thanks: 98 Thanked 133 Times in 122 Posts	05-18-2011, 11:02 AM Nice work everyone. @ kemalgunel: I would love to see this one in color @ kittensoft : Nice idea. I think you should work a bit more on the lighting. try to put cast shadows. @ cheo36 : Nice work. I'm sorry to say that but i think the version you've posted Yesterday, 03:17 PM works better than your last one. Less symmetrical, more textured. Try to find a mix between those two version maybe. Keep going

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