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My fellow, wish you all the best... seriously in this war.

So I will create female personage.

Name:
Forest Nymph
Race: Norms/Nymph
Class: Invoker
Powerful Magical Weapon: Syren of Woodland


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    Pretty nice beginning, I really like the pointy hair due.
    If I may say though, you should either make it way smaller or much longer. It's visually the same length as the back of the hair. You obtained something very neutral witch is fine, but if you want to make your character stand out, you should choose break the symmetry.

    Great start!
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      Looks cool, but don't stop now! You could explore many possibilities like skin texture and costume. Maybe her skintone is strange to land creatures, or resemble fish scales...
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        Wow thats really awesome! luv the hair! It's really awesome so far what you have and you've just started! can't wait to see more ^^
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        Looks cool, but don't stop now! You could explore many possibilities like skin texture and costume. Maybe her skintone is strange to land creatures, or resemble fish scales...
        Oh yes I'm still thinking about costume, I want to make it more massive, powerful and dangeros. And thanks

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        Pretty nice beginning, I really like the pointy hair due.
        If I may say though, you should either make it way smaller or much longer. It's visually the same length as the back of the hair. You obtained something very neutral witch is fine, but if you want to make your character stand out, you should choose break the symmetry.

        Great start!
        I will see what can I do and thanks for critic.

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        Wow thats really awesome! luv the hair! It's really awesome so far what you have and you've just started! can't wait to see more ^^
        Thanks, I really love the hair my self.
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          Very nice drawings, the gestures are great! *jealous*
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            The pointy hairdue reminds me of your general portrait. Don't know if you were going for that or not. If you wanted to change it up a little, try adding more pointy hair clumps! Maybe a couple more coming out from the sides a bit to complete a more full sillhouette.

            I love the pose in the bottom right though. She looks pretty dominant confident like that.
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              I remember u use the same pointy hair on your general... I wish it could be different thou. It is a bit weird for me. Hmm... I thought she was a Tree Nymph or some sort as the leaves-like-thing on her body implies it. Maybe use more water habitants oranism such as fish scale, fin or some sort; to make it more Sea Witchy? I like the silhouette's dressing. It's protential to be developed more to Sexy + Magical type of visual feeling.
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              Babypowder : Thanks I really love pointy hairdue

              Fallencypt: Oh my God, thanks Fallencypt a nymph, that is slashing idea and I really love it. Thanks again.


              Thanks fellows. I was doodling today and I made this sketch for fun and got some new disaining to.

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                Nice update, the hair shape reminds me of kekai's ..
                http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_LoklNj_45x...Maleficent.jpg

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                  Ah, I really like the armor design. Watch her right arm though (our left), looks a bit too far back to me like it's disconnected.
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                  jurffy Thank and I don't know for me many personage have some similarities.

                  threecharles Thanks and I don't think so, because I use some references and it is and perspective magic to.
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                    OOOO nice looking very blizzard you caught a lot of motion in this cant wait to see the illo.
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                      wow, this looks really cool


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