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    Default 2D Yigit Koroglu - The Oath (of machines)


    Well since the title said " Lifeless forest " i thought there is nothing wrong to create a forest with machine natives.It doesnt say "dead" :P

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      I like your idea very much - cool sketch.
      Good luck!
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        Here is the robot or mecha however you call it.It looks like a brand new robot since there is not even a scratch on it :P
        I'll add some scratches,some smash effects etc. to make it look more realistic.


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          still needs some scratches here and there on the robot.needs little creatures here and there.Some targeting laser of the robots that is visible in the misty parts.and some more details etc.
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            Im not 100% sure about the colors but, wanted to do something different.First i thought to make the colors of the robot something like a camouflage but then changed my mind since it was too ordinary.Gonna do some moss on some parts maybe

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              Here are some details.

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                Guys can you tell me which one is better, this one, or the previous one? May need some help on deciding there
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                Guys can you tell me which one is better, this one, or the previous one? May need some help on deciding there
                ...hmmm , 'not trying to distract with your vision here, but can you make /render a3rd one?,the lighting inbetween the two that you've made.
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                  Dude, that rocks!!! So awesome...

                  What if you add some rim light on the kid/bear coming from the robot? It seems like he should be affected more by those lights...and maybe darken the back of the kid a little? The image feels really warm, it might be intresting to introduce some cool lights/color somewhere...

                  Did you model the trees and background?
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                    i kinda like the new one for the mystery of the bot but you miss some of the detail... hard decision but damn it looks sweet
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                      I also miss the more robotic/mechanical looking trees in your sketch, it helps to integrate the forest and the robot better...and robot still feels feels to clean, what about removing some of the red color which makes him feel more like a visitor instead of a resident of the lifeless forest?
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                        Ok thanks for the comments.Now ,i'll rework on the kid and lighten his hair a little ( you know the light ssweeping through it ) and make the kids back a little darker.I drew all of this, if you mean modeling , like in 3d modeling, this is completely 2d .Maybe i can do some atjustment to the color of the bot and give a little more green/blue to it.Let me do the adjustments and submit the new one today.
                        Guys thank you really much for the inputs
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                            whoa... so awesome. this is very intense. Sort of reminds me of the new War of the Worlds movie. Like a kid just came face to face with some alien machine. Nice job! This is great
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