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claudiocerri · 03-16-2011, 04:51 PM

This is a commission work for a role play game. Please give me your critique...

endospire · 04-04-2011, 07:07 PM

Hey, I really like the design you have there, could you give us a bit more info on who/what they're supposed to be?

claudiocerri · 04-05-2011, 08:58 AM

Hey, thank you very much! They are a characters of an RPG card game. They are called "Ice Giants". They are artificial intelligences who wander in a frozen earth...

endospire · 04-05-2011, 12:35 PM

ooo, okay.
Well you certainly accomplished that. Also, I only just noticed that the pattern of lines on each is unique, which is a good touch.
The only thing i can thin of is the use of orange there. Call me a simple traditionalist, I'd associate blue with Ice Giants. Of course I could just be thinking in the box. Have you considered using a mountain backdrop?

claudiocerri · 04-05-2011, 12:51 PM

Yes I think to use mountain is a good Idea. Sure I use this background in my next giant's illustraition...
Thank you for your opinion of the orange... I used the orange color as not to confuse the robots in the fog...

endospire · 04-05-2011, 04:54 PM

That makes sense.
Good work so far, I look forward to seeing how it turns out

Jim

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claudiocerri Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 7 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Eden- Commission work 03-16-2011, 04:51 PM This is a commission work for a role play game. Please give me your critique... __________________ Portfolio Sketchblog Facebook Page

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endospire Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 12 Junior Member Thanks: 2 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	04-04-2011, 07:07 PM Hey, I really like the design you have there, could you give us a bit more info on who/what they're supposed to be?

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claudiocerri Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 7 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	04-05-2011, 08:58 AM Hey, thank you very much! They are a characters of an RPG card game. They are called "Ice Giants". They are artificial intelligences who wander in a frozen earth... __________________ Portfolio Sketchblog Facebook Page

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endospire Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 12 Junior Member Thanks: 2 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	04-05-2011, 12:35 PM ooo, okay. Well you certainly accomplished that. Also, I only just noticed that the pattern of lines on each is unique, which is a good touch. The only thing i can thin of is the use of orange there. Call me a simple traditionalist, I'd associate blue with Ice Giants. Of course I could just be thinking in the box. Have you considered using a mountain backdrop?

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claudiocerri Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 7 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	04-05-2011, 12:51 PM Yes I think to use mountain is a good Idea. Sure I use this background in my next giant's illustraition... Thank you for your opinion of the orange... I used the orange color as not to confuse the robots in the fog... __________________ Portfolio Sketchblog Facebook Page

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endospire Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 12 Junior Member Thanks: 2 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	04-05-2011, 04:54 PM That makes sense. Good work so far, I look forward to seeing how it turns out Jim

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