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    This is a commission work for a role play game. Please give me your critique...
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      Hey, I really like the design you have there, could you give us a bit more info on who/what they're supposed to be?
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        Hey, thank you very much! They are a characters of an RPG card game. They are called "Ice Giants". They are artificial intelligences who wander in a frozen earth...
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          ooo, okay.
          Well you certainly accomplished that. Also, I only just noticed that the pattern of lines on each is unique, which is a good touch.
          The only thing i can thin of is the use of orange there. Call me a simple traditionalist, I'd associate blue with Ice Giants. Of course I could just be thinking in the box. Have you considered using a mountain backdrop?
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            Yes I think to use mountain is a good Idea. Sure I use this background in my next giant's illustraition...
            Thank you for your opinion of the orange... I used the orange color as not to confuse the robots in the fog...
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              That makes sense.
              Good work so far, I look forward to seeing how it turns out

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