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10-08-2010, 01:16 PM
Had Fun!! heres mine
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10-11-2010, 05:44 PM
Fun stuff. I almost entered this one, but didn't have enough time.
Voted for GlennPearce as his piece I thought best captured the brief. Glenn, what did you work in? It looks like pen with digital paints, but I'm not sure. I at first thought it was colored pencil when I glanced at it initially. Couple of crits: Your twins are reading more as two separate people overlapping due to perspective than two cojoined persons. There's a lot that could have been done here with these two - next time try to push the exaggeration some with the characters. Not to cartoonish levels necessarily, but make them the most of what they are within the style that you're working - don't hold back. The background totally loses it for me - the scrumbling is rough on the eyes, and doesn't do your characters any favors. Since this is Illustrated, it would have been nice to have more of a setting, or at least a background that helped enhance your characters and evoked a mood or a sense of place. I *really* like your crab man. I think you struck that one out of the park. madpoint I like where you were going with this, but try taking out the focal point from the camera lens and see if your image continues to work. Your Twins character is hard to read as well - I almost completely missed the other head. With the composition as it is now (sans lens focus) this character would be where your eyes end up. Try using the composition of the scene itself to help lead the eye to where you want it - in this case the victim running out of the tent - another way to accomplish this is by using lighting, and dropping the others into the shadows. NGomesS Nicely done gorilla, but it didn't carry the idea of "Circus" for me. Unfortunately, what did come to mind was the street corner accordion monkey for some reason. One way around this would be to include a quick sketch of the big top in the background, or even a circus wagon - something to help communicate the idea that the circus has come to town, and it's about to eat you alive! All that said, good work everyone! Looking forward to the next round of Illustrated! Best, ~Shane
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