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aargh · 07-12-2010, 05:09 PM

thanks for the critique icon, the addition of the background wood was an after thought and im kind of confused on how to actually check/adjust my perspective! and youre right, i was thinking of drawing him looking at the viewer but couldnt think of a pose, i think i have a solution though

thanks

naetronic · 07-12-2010, 11:09 PM

You wouldn't think MGMT would be good music to work to but it is ...
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Dona · 07-13-2010, 12:16 AM

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Started sketching this weekend, nothing concrete yet. First thing I pictured was the Sphinx gate, that whole sequence really freaked me out! in a good way

I love the thumbnail! It's one of the most memorable scenes from the movie, I think, it certainly creeped me out as a kid.

ionic · 07-13-2010, 01:39 AM

icon: thanks for the props... just checked out your book too... great work man... you doing an image? or are you exempt?

DaveRapoza: hope you do join!... and grab trevors lazy but and get him in on it!

ionic · 07-13-2010, 03:51 AM

A lil tighter... any feedback from TNS fans would be awesome... does it feel right?

arenyth · 07-13-2010, 04:19 AM

ionic: You really nailed Falcor, his cute little face

I think this is an awesome solid start, but I feel like you're doing Artax (the horse) a disservice by not showing his whole face -I really like the flow of the composition, but he just feels a little cut off maybe? Looks freakin awesome though!

/goes back to thumbing

nerahla · 01:56 PM

This is my little addition. It's done - and I'm so sorry I could not add text -- whenever I try the Text Tool in CS5 my Photoshop crashes into oblivion.

Anyway, I finished this quickly/early because I am headed to San Diego Comic Con and I wanted to also work on a couple more portfolio pieces before I head out.

Just my sorry attempt. Title text would go at the top, author at the bottom. Sorry I couldn't add it!!

ionic · 07-13-2010, 05:39 AM

just a color test... kinda like it... but I need to go back and make some much tighter lines before I try it again

arttorney · 07-13-2010, 05:20 PM

I like your layout idea Ionic and the lines are firming up well, but I think I would prefer to see a three bands of color approach like neapolitan ice cream or something. The warmish stuff across the bottom works for me, but the two thirds above are a little overwhelmingly violet. That is what caused me to think of the third color trend across the top.

RobRey · 10:50 PM

Here's my first pass sketch

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ionic - looks like we had a similar idea with Sebastian at the bottom

ionic · 07-13-2010, 10:55 PM

RobRey: Nah I'm just on your brain waves

... but honestly... I think you should drop Bastian and put the the "Nothingness" wolf in the background... like his beady ass eyes larger than life looking at the camera... think it would pop a lot!

ionic · 07-14-2010, 03:34 AM

Everyone: Don't be shy... show some work

ionic · 07-14-2010, 06:14 AM

Starting the coloring... all done for tonight

nerahla · 07-14-2010, 12:23 PM

RobRey, love this so much, so much movement and action, and I love the frame -- quite beautiful. I don't think you even need Bastien down there at all!

icon · 07-14-2010, 04:56 PM

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Originally Posted by ionic

icon: thanks for the props... just checked out your book too... great work man... you doing an image? or are you exempt?

Nope :P i'm joining in. I've been working on some thumbnails which I will share soon! :P it's gonna be fuuun.

Rob Rey: Hellll yaaa! It's so good to see you here man! I can't wait to see what you do with them thumbz

bravo work everyone ! Keep it uuuup!

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aargh Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 3 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts	07-12-2010, 05:09 PM thanks for the critique icon, the addition of the background wood was an after thought and im kind of confused on how to actually check/adjust my perspective! and youre right, i was thinking of drawing him looking at the viewer but couldnt think of a pose, i think i have a solution though thanks

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ionic Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 679 Member My Mood: Thanks: 392 Thanked 376 Times in 237 Posts	07-13-2010, 01:39 AM icon: thanks for the props... just checked out your book too... great work man... you doing an image? or are you exempt? DaveRapoza: hope you do join!... and grab trevors lazy but and get him in on it! __________________ ionic's sketchbook

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ionic Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 679 Member My Mood: Thanks: 392 Thanked 376 Times in 237 Posts	07-13-2010, 03:51 AM A lil tighter... any feedback from TNS fans would be awesome... does it feel right? __________________ ionic's sketchbook

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arenyth Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 52 Member My Mood: Thanks: 10 Thanked 30 Times in 20 Posts	07-13-2010, 04:19 AM ionic: You really nailed Falcor, his cute little face I think this is an awesome solid start, but I feel like you're doing Artax (the horse) a disservice by not showing his whole face -I really like the flow of the composition, but he just feels a little cut off maybe? Looks freakin awesome though! /goes back to thumbing

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nerahla Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 41 Member My Mood: Thanks: 9 Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts	My addition 07-13-2010, 05:10 AM This is my little addition. It's done - and I'm so sorry I could not add text -- whenever I try the Text Tool in CS5 my Photoshop crashes into oblivion. Anyway, I finished this quickly/early because I am headed to San Diego Comic Con and I wanted to also work on a couple more portfolio pieces before I head out. Just my sorry attempt. Title text would go at the top, author at the bottom. Sorry I couldn't add it!! __________________ "The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. It is the source of all true art and science. He to whom the emotion is a stranger, who can no longer pause and stand wrapped in awe, is as good as dead; his eyes are closed." ~Albert Einstein My Portfolio My Twitter My Blog Last edited by nerahla; 07-13-2010 at 01:56 PM.

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ionic Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 679 Member My Mood: Thanks: 392 Thanked 376 Times in 237 Posts	07-13-2010, 05:39 AM just a color test... kinda like it... but I need to go back and make some much tighter lines before I try it again __________________ ionic's sketchbook

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arttorney Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 1,592 Moderator My Mood: Thanks: 165 Thanked 406 Times in 325 Posts	07-13-2010, 05:20 PM I like your layout idea Ionic and the lines are firming up well, but I think I would prefer to see a three bands of color approach like neapolitan ice cream or something. The warmish stuff across the bottom works for me, but the two thirds above are a little overwhelmingly violet. That is what caused me to think of the third color trend across the top. __________________ Please visit the "New Worlds" recurring Activity. My sketchbook is at: http://cghub.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1812&page=20

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RobRey Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 207 Senior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 26 Times in 19 Posts	07-13-2010, 10:19 PM Here's my first pass sketch ionic - looks like we had a similar idea with Sebastian at the bottom __________________ Website - robreyart.com Sketchbook - Blog - CG HUB Last edited by RobRey; 07-13-2010 at 10:50 PM.

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ionic Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 679 Member My Mood: Thanks: 392 Thanked 376 Times in 237 Posts	07-13-2010, 10:55 PM RobRey: Nah I'm just on your brain waves ... but honestly... I think you should drop Bastian and put the the "Nothingness" wolf in the background... like his beady ass eyes larger than life looking at the camera... think it would pop a lot! __________________ ionic's sketchbook

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nerahla Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 41 Member My Mood: Thanks: 9 Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts	07-14-2010, 12:23 PM RobRey, love this so much, so much movement and action, and I love the frame -- quite beautiful. I don't think you even need Bastien down there at all! __________________ "The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. It is the source of all true art and science. He to whom the emotion is a stranger, who can no longer pause and stand wrapped in awe, is as good as dead; his eyes are closed." ~Albert Einstein My Portfolio My Twitter My Blog