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    Hey guys, here s smt i m workin on, thought i could use some help, pls comment
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              anyone?
              maybe some tips on chromatics
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                  Your pelvis is off...its making the legs look like they are connected by action figure limb hooks...if you've ever dismembered your GI-Joes youd know what Im talking about. I think its the pubic symphasis --it looks too low. Try adding some volume to the thighs, see if that works, and decrease the lenth of the abdomen by moving her pelvis up...and the arm holding the cigarette should be a little lighter to match the other arm. Your painting technique looks solid though, keep it up
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                      I liked the old color scheme better, the magenta is killing the cool, urban mood you had before.

                      good fix on the pelvis w/raising it.
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                        I agree with liking the older color scheme more. It had a more realistic and urban feel to it.


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