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BMJ · 08:24 PM

crits on the form would be appreciated...

...long way to go on this 1!

muchos gracias

BMJ · 03-12-2010, 07:28 PM

...thought I would keep it clean with vector lines and hand draw hair (later) for some contrast...

BMJ · 03-16-2010, 08:46 PM

Here's wip4...

...blocking in the other main elements, might try some variations on the wings?

msinc · 03-16-2010, 09:16 PM

Hey there, BMJ.

I really like your lines here. Very clean and efficient.
I would maybe suggest not making the lines so dominant on some of her facial features however. The areas like the cheeks, the crease by her nose and her lips are very round, delicate features. (imo)They should be defined more so by light and shadow(tones) Not to say that you should remove the lines completely

Definitely think you can get more creative with the wings. I am not sure how you plan on finishing those off, but definitely think about creating a design you like, then working on just one side until you like it and then mirror the layer(to keep the symmetry of butterfly wings.) Keep at it!

BMJ · 03-17-2010, 11:39 AM

Hey thanks MSINC,

really appreciate the crits, the line work is just a base at the mo, my plan is to work out all the forms then move onto the values properly.

Will definatly take your advice on the shading

btw well done in the jam your peice is very strong & original!

PS will play with some more wing forms next

BMJ · 03-19-2010, 06:59 PM

Hey Hubbers, here's wip 5- lookin at an alternative wing design (maybe simplify it a bit??)

Also starting to play with the values, got to try and crack it in the next 10 days (along with a couple of other jobs

)

can anyone tell me how to change the thumb on this thread to my latest post??

BMJ · 03-20-2010, 07:56 PM

wip 6, scrapped the last wings, concentrating on the main character first...

BMJ · 03-21-2010, 08:20 PM

...more work on the values + last sk effort on the wings = running out of time on this 1...

over 100 views and 1 comment

BMJ · 03-24-2010, 08:20 PM

wings updated, clouds need tightening & colours to be played with...

...gotta get the levels right!

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BMJ Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 248 Member My Mood: Thanks: 72 Thanked 44 Times in 39 Posts	cyber fae sk wip 03-11-2010, 05:13 PM crits on the form would be appreciated... ...long way to go on this 1! muchos gracias Attached Thumbnails Last edited by BMJ; 03-21-2010 at 08:24 PM. Reason: put current wip to show updated thumb in thread

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BMJ Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 248 Member My Mood: Thanks: 72 Thanked 44 Times in 39 Posts	Update... 03-12-2010, 07:28 PM ...thought I would keep it clean with vector lines and hand draw hair (later) for some contrast... Attached Thumbnails

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BMJ Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 248 Member My Mood: Thanks: 72 Thanked 44 Times in 39 Posts	Anyone?!? 03-16-2010, 08:46 PM Here's wip4... ...blocking in the other main elements, might try some variations on the wings? Attached Thumbnails

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msinc Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 10 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	03-16-2010, 09:16 PM Hey there, BMJ. I really like your lines here. Very clean and efficient. I would maybe suggest not making the lines so dominant on some of her facial features however. The areas like the cheeks, the crease by her nose and her lips are very round, delicate features. (imo)They should be defined more so by light and shadow(tones) Not to say that you should remove the lines completely Definitely think you can get more creative with the wings. I am not sure how you plan on finishing those off, but definitely think about creating a design you like, then working on just one side until you like it and then mirror the layer(to keep the symmetry of butterfly wings.) Keep at it!

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BMJ Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 248 Member My Mood: Thanks: 72 Thanked 44 Times in 39 Posts	Finally :) 03-17-2010, 11:39 AM Hey thanks MSINC, really appreciate the crits, the line work is just a base at the mo, my plan is to work out all the forms then move onto the values properly. Will definatly take your advice on the shading btw well done in the jam your peice is very strong & original! PS will play with some more wing forms next

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BMJ Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 248 Member My Mood: Thanks: 72 Thanked 44 Times in 39 Posts	Wip 5 03-19-2010, 06:59 PM Hey Hubbers, here's wip 5- lookin at an alternative wing design (maybe simplify it a bit??) Also starting to play with the values, got to try and crack it in the next 10 days (along with a couple of other jobs ) can anyone tell me how to change the thumb on this thread to my latest post?? Attached Thumbnails

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BMJ Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 248 Member My Mood: Thanks: 72 Thanked 44 Times in 39 Posts	ho hum 03-20-2010, 07:56 PM wip 6, scrapped the last wings, concentrating on the main character first... Attached Thumbnails

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BMJ Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 248 Member My Mood: Thanks: 72 Thanked 44 Times in 39 Posts	lucky number 03-21-2010, 08:20 PM ...more work on the values + last sk effort on the wings = running out of time on this 1... over 100 views and 1 comment Attached Thumbnails

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BMJ Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 248 Member My Mood: Thanks: 72 Thanked 44 Times in 39 Posts	otg 03-24-2010, 08:20 PM wings updated, clouds need tightening & colours to be played with... ...gotta get the levels right! Attached Thumbnails

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