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    Default Four pages I recently finished

    10-15-2009, 06:43 AM

    Let me know what ya'll think, it's the only way I can get better.

    http://cghub.com/images/view/37599/

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      03-17-2010, 02:40 PM

      Looks solid, really cool, but the characters get lost; you could separate them more with blacks; maybe add blacks tot he middle ground characters, that way it would be white foreground, black middle, white background (aliens). Also, the characters are stiff, but drawn nicely. Put some force, flow, rhythm into them!
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        03-17-2010, 03:29 PM

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        Looks solid, really cool, but the characters get lost; you could separate them more with blacks; maybe add blacks tot he middle ground characters, that way it would be white foreground, black middle, white background (aliens). Also, the characters are stiff, but drawn nicely. Put some force, flow, rhythm into them!
        Great suggestions. I will definitely keep them in mind as I move forward with my work. Thanks.

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