[notpill]

Originally Posted by Scribblehead

Final entry

wonderful
you've got my vote

[Schmoek]

There's a gun for that.

[Rogue]

Gwendz: I really like your weapon redesign, it's not bulky and seems to match the character's personality better.

Yeah, bulky, then I start designing THIS!

[mogster]

Got to give mine a quick color pass etc... needs alot of tweaking still but hey.

[Leion]

Sorry for not posting as mux!Xchool stuff.
Here's the character design.My friends say looks like a plummer.
Do I need help?

[jon_bosco]

Hey people! Good works here!

Pungang: I loved the style of your guy! Coffe? hehe

GweNdZ: Nice colors.

Kingkostas: I liked your concept. Keep it going.

Irawan: Dynamic lines! =)

Nightblue: I'm curious to see your final!

Here are my initial ideas. Only these days I had time to begin my entry. I hope you enjoy it! Comments, critiques and opinions are welcome!

[Deadbyxmas]

I've been wanting to do this kind of pic, so this DJ gave me the opportunity...I hope I manage to complete it in time!

[Sublimus]

Good stuff so far people!!

Here is where mine stands so far! (First drawing jam for meeeee!)



Still need to resolve the BFG, heheh

[gafana]

Some update

[ian]

Really cool entries so far; here's some doodles I've got!

[arenyth]

Didn't get to post yesterday, Lost always messes up my drawing sessions

Took another pass on the gun, lightened her skin, though I think I want to more. Hair/leather/etc etc. And I still haven't touched the bg!

[GweNdZ]

arenyth! That looks amazing! D: Keep it up ^^
Sublimus : I love the colours ^^
jon_bosco: thanks!
Scribblehead :

[Scribblehead]

GweNdZL - hehe thankies

arenyth - Really like the composition and pose, though the anatomy is a bit wonky at places (her clavicles are missing, and the breasts look a bit out of place.)
Overall piece has this kind of 'Ghost in the shell' cyber-punk feel, especially since you chose the pink/purple hair so the gun design doesn't seem to fit the 'universe' she'd be in, looks almost like a 50's ray gun.
Also take care of the perspective on the weapon, the stock has a different vanishing point than the barrel.

Sublimus - Hope you finish this one, looks interesting

Deadbyxmas - far too early to critique your entry, although the anatomy is a bit funky, might be a style thing though :P

jon_bosco - Uhh i somehow these remind me a bit of Resident evil

Leion - this one is gonna be cool if you go with the whole '18th century weaponry' style....gotta love those powder filled guns .
I'd very much encourage you to look up human reference for the pose, or take a picture....its an incredibly difficult one you've chosen.
If you're in doubt about whether or not a pose works, try acting it out - i find this quite useful since obviously if you fall flat on your face it probably won't work for the character either.

mogster -Really liking your entry mogster, although i somehow thinks he looking a tad bit sad.
Kudos for choosing a spinning clip for that WWII mg...it's got pizazz!

Schmoek - Its hard to figure out the design for the 'contraption' the character is turning on, i know the screen is supposed to show this - but somehow i think it would be better to show it off in action maybe?
Piece has a very interesting style though, can't wait to see more .

notpill - hehe thanks dude, i'm eagerly awaiting your next update

gafana - This is gonna be a cool piece i think when finished, you're having some odd anatomy issues, mainly the hip/chest area...they seem very out of proportion, plus i can't help but feel the piece would be better without the slightly tacky nudity.

[arenyth]

Scribblehead - haha, yea everything you noticed I know, I especially started noticing the gun perspective as I was painting it last night. As for the gun vs. cyberpunk, I am actually going for a future-retropunk, so I just need to find a way to match the rest of her more to fit in that style. Perhaps black leather isn't the way to go...? I think that consistent design is one of my major problems. I'll fix the clavicle tonight, I think that will help with the breast placement too. And I was trying to figure out why the pink hair seemed familiar...so crap! I will probably change that tonight. So much to do...

[Scribblehead]

Originally Posted by arenyth

Scribblehead - haha, yea everything you noticed I know, I especially started noticing the gun perspective as I was painting it last night. As for the gun vs. cyberpunk, I am actually going for a future-retropunk, so I just need to find a way to match the rest of her more to fit in that style. Perhaps black leather isn't the way to go...? I think that consistent design is one of my major problems. I'll fix the clavicle tonight, I think that will help with the breast placement too. And I was trying to figure out why the pink hair seemed familiar...so crap! I will probably change that tonight. So much to do...

Sweet, ok then i can totally understand the gun design.
Hehe well i think black leather is fine, just be careful not to put yourself in a corner, since leather picks up a lot of light sources in darkness as compared to during the day, so its def. challenging clothing you've chosen :P

Hehe nothing wrong with pink hair, just instantly reminded me, cuz of the pose, clothing, gender but its neat, because it shows who the character is (flamboyant, cocky, in-your-face)