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JonMcCoy · 01-08-2010, 06:45 PM

Really nice drawing goog.
Loving this so far Des. I dont know if you're even wanting crits, but to increase dynamism with more than one character, having them looking in different directions or looking at different things sometimes helps.

koshime · 01-08-2010, 06:51 PM

The left side character could even look slightly towards the viewer to engage the eye more (back seat drivers eh!)

Mix · 01-08-2010, 07:03 PM

DesHanley: Ah now i can see it clearly, niiice going! it looks cool!

DesHanley · 01-08-2010, 07:16 PM

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Originally Posted by JonMcCoy

Loving this so far Des. I dont know if you're even wanting crits, but to increase dynamism with more than one character, having them looking in different directions or looking at different things sometimes helps.

I always want crits - good or bad, as long as they're constructive (I may not use them all but they are gratefully accepted)

Nothing is worse than putting up some art and getting zero response - I mean that's why we put up online isn't it, to promote ourselves and get crits, right?

mogster · 01-08-2010, 07:36 PM

I hate posting a last post on a page -_-

SCWatson · 01-09-2010, 03:15 PM

Mogster - I really like the way that is coming together. My only caveat at the moment is that it's a touch dark (but that may be just the stage you're at, so it's not a big deal).

Best,
~S

mogster · 01-09-2010, 08:08 PM

Yea it is a bit dark.. may get a little darker .. or lighter depending on how i do the rest of the lighting I guess Ie: his hair isn't fully rendered or lightened properly. I'll work on it a bunch tomorrow.

gutss · 01-10-2010, 01:37 PM

I very much like this idea for a challenge! Definitely going to join in

Some good stuff going on in here (mogster, I love those lights. they look delightful). To me, the loose side of his shirt looks unnatural (it's very flat all the way down to where it flaps out and suddenly, creases!) I wish I could specify more what I mean!

zemotion · 01-10-2010, 02:10 PM

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Originally Posted by mogster

I hate posting a last post on a page -_-

I LOVE how it's looking, keep going!!!

gutss · 01-10-2010, 03:47 PM

hey, don't know if these will be useful at all but I remember a couple of weeks ago I went to the marvellous Papplewick Pumping Station close to where I live and took a few reference photos

I don't know if they'll be useful but the place is absolutely mint

GETCHO STEAMPUNK FREAK ON!

(psst, sorry if this clogs the thread too much for anyone. let me know and I'll change it post haste!)

mogster · 01-10-2010, 04:18 PM

zemotion - thanks will do ^^
Gutss - ^^ yea your right about the shirt will give it a redo.

SCWatson · 01-10-2010, 04:18 PM

gutss - *Awesome!* Thank you!

naetronic · 01-10-2010, 08:37 PM

Front - Composition

Mix · 01-10-2010, 08:49 PM

naetronic, i love the mood and the composition of the front cover, awsomely donee!!

mogster · 01-10-2010, 09:44 PM

I really love the colors. looks great so far

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JonMcCoy Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 27 Member Thanks: 1 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	01-08-2010, 06:45 PM Really nice drawing goog. Loving this so far Des. I dont know if you're even wanting crits, but to increase dynamism with more than one character, having them looking in different directions or looking at different things sometimes helps.

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koshime Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 79 Member Thanks: 1 Thanked 26 Times in 17 Posts	01-08-2010, 06:51 PM The left side character could even look slightly towards the viewer to engage the eye more (back seat drivers eh!)

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Mix Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 22 Junior Member Thanks: 5 Thanked 9 Times in 7 Posts	01-08-2010, 07:03 PM DesHanley: Ah now i can see it clearly, niiice going! it looks cool!

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mogster Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 202 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 7 Thanked 37 Times in 31 Posts	01-08-2010, 07:36 PM I hate posting a last post on a page -_- Attached Thumbnails

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SCWatson Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 937 Administrator Thanks: 774 Thanked 500 Times in 321 Posts	01-09-2010, 03:15 PM Mogster - I really like the way that is coming together. My only caveat at the moment is that it's a touch dark (but that may be just the stage you're at, so it's not a big deal). Best, ~S __________________ -------------- S.C. Watson, a.k.a. "Oregano" Community Director & chief trouble maker Sketchbook :: Blog ---- 2D CreatureFORGE \| Illustrated \| CharacterFORGE \| Drawing Jam \| New Worlds \| Anatomicae ---- 3D CreatureFORGE \| CharacterFORGE \| 3D Jams

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mogster Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 202 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 7 Thanked 37 Times in 31 Posts	01-09-2010, 08:08 PM Yea it is a bit dark.. may get a little darker .. or lighter depending on how i do the rest of the lighting I guess Ie: his hair isn't fully rendered or lightened properly. I'll work on it a bunch tomorrow.

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gutss Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 9 Junior Member Thanks: 1 Thanked 9 Times in 5 Posts	01-10-2010, 01:37 PM I very much like this idea for a challenge! Definitely going to join in Some good stuff going on in here (mogster, I love those lights. they look delightful). To me, the loose side of his shirt looks unnatural (it's very flat all the way down to where it flaps out and suddenly, creases!) I wish I could specify more what I mean!

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gutss Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 9 Junior Member Thanks: 1 Thanked 9 Times in 5 Posts	01-10-2010, 03:47 PM hey, don't know if these will be useful at all but I remember a couple of weeks ago I went to the marvellous Papplewick Pumping Station close to where I live and took a few reference photos I don't know if they'll be useful but the place is absolutely mint GETCHO STEAMPUNK FREAK ON! (psst, sorry if this clogs the thread too much for anyone. let me know and I'll change it post haste!)

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mogster Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 202 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 7 Thanked 37 Times in 31 Posts	01-10-2010, 04:18 PM zemotion - thanks will do ^^ Gutss - ^^ yea your right about the shirt will give it a redo.

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SCWatson Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 937 Administrator Thanks: 774 Thanked 500 Times in 321 Posts	01-10-2010, 04:18 PM gutss - Awesome! Thank you! __________________ -------------- S.C. Watson, a.k.a. "Oregano" Community Director & chief trouble maker Sketchbook :: Blog ---- 2D CreatureFORGE \| Illustrated \| CharacterFORGE \| Drawing Jam \| New Worlds \| Anatomicae ---- 3D CreatureFORGE \| CharacterFORGE \| 3D Jams

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Mix Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 22 Junior Member Thanks: 5 Thanked 9 Times in 7 Posts	01-10-2010, 08:49 PM naetronic, i love the mood and the composition of the front cover, awsomely donee!!

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mogster Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 202 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 7 Thanked 37 Times in 31 Posts	01-10-2010, 09:44 PM I really love the colors. looks great so far