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LeoMarkP · 12-21-2012, 08:19 AM

Hello!

I am new to storyboarding and would love to hear your feedback.

If or when you can, please let me know what you think.

Thank you and enjoy!

- Mark

fersteger · 01-04-2013, 06:41 AM

Cool story. I like it, your work reads very cleanly and I got the whole story just from the images. I think you can work on refinement of technique like shading in backgrounds and putting more emphasis on the focal points of each image, but your storyboards look good to me, do you have more?

LeoMarkP · 01-07-2013, 06:25 PM

Thank you for your comments and advice Alex. I'm glad you like the story and that the boards read clearly. I'll work on empasizing the focal points more and putting shading on the background. Unfortunately I don't have more boards to show yet but I will be posting new ones as soon as I'm able to.

Thanks again

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LeoMarkP Join Date: Sep 2012 Posts: 20 Junior Member Thanks: 5 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Scared to Swim 12-21-2012, 08:19 AM Hello! I am new to storyboarding and would love to hear your feedback. If or when you can, please let me know what you think. Thank you and enjoy! - Mark Attached Thumbnails __________________ Story Portfolio Blog Have a great day!

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fersteger Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 31 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts	01-04-2013, 06:41 AM Cool story. I like it, your work reads very cleanly and I got the whole story just from the images. I think you can work on refinement of technique like shading in backgrounds and putting more emphasis on the focal points of each image, but your storyboards look good to me, do you have more?

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LeoMarkP Join Date: Sep 2012 Posts: 20 Junior Member Thanks: 5 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	01-07-2013, 06:25 PM Thank you for your comments and advice Alex. I'm glad you like the story and that the boards read clearly. I'll work on empasizing the focal points more and putting shading on the background. Unfortunately I don't have more boards to show yet but I will be posting new ones as soon as I'm able to. Thanks again __________________ Story Portfolio Blog Have a great day!

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