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Sorknes · 11-09-2012, 10:22 AM

Whoa, your latest stuff looks really, really good. Love the waterfalls, even though I kind of think I liked it purplish even more.

And that last one is stunningly full of action, good work sir!

JoseVega · 11-13-2012, 05:00 AM

Hey Sorkness thanks a lot!

WIP-3 Still working it in between work! Could not leave it alone!
I know its been forever

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JoseVega · 11-13-2012, 03:19 PM

Just another Fan art of Naruto....
Finally Done
I hope you like
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malo · 11-14-2012, 01:01 PM

Hey Jose,
looking pretty gooooood, mate!! Great colors and action going on here.
Some suggestions (if its OK for you)…
I'd love to see the char one left side a bit more pop out. Maybe some brighter values or a bit of rim light. The huge shadow on the "wall� could be a bit harder (imo).
other than that - you did a great job and you still improving a lot.

And besides that - hope all is well on your side.
Cheers

mjasnowski · 11-14-2012, 07:43 PM

Great job on the Naruto piece!!

I agree with Markus, some of the lighting could use some tweaks. Compositionally I'm not 100% sure what is happening, is something breaking in? Out? Is the guy on the left in the bubble doing that to the wall? Keep pushing it!

irawan · 11-14-2012, 09:09 PM

really great job on the color and rendering,
it would be really great if the view of him/naruto is not really from the backside, a litle bit from the side i thing is not bad idea, since his position on the composition is more into the left side then in the middle.

keep it rocking!!

JoseVega · 11-23-2012, 12:41 AM

hey guys, thanks a lot for the comments! i appreciate it!
This fan art pieces im really just kinda going for fun with this, experiencing some of the events in the story....
@marcus - thanks man! yah i was debating on that since he is inside that thing, not much light is going in so i was not sure

@mike - hey, ummm the left guy is gonna be guarding from another guy coming with the electricity.....
@ira - i agree... its a good point that he is on the left side instead of the middle.... thanks

ok her eis another fun one
FAN ART
Pain vs Naruto
CHIBAKU TENSEI
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JoseVega · 11-26-2012, 02:49 AM

Developed an unapproved sketch. A bit stuck here... Not sure if I should add a figure or something... what u guys think?
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irawan · 11-26-2012, 01:41 PM

hi jose,
mai 2011,
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the last updates compare to your worked one year ago.
man......you are awesome!!!

mjasnowski · 11-26-2012, 02:16 PM

Agree with Heri, you've come alooong way!! Keep pushing it!

mjasnowski · 11-26-2012, 02:18 PM

Latest is looking really good, maybe add some splashes of colors, flags, etc.. Figure or two might help also. Maybe play with some contrast in places, values feel a bit the same overall.

JoseVega · 11-26-2012, 02:19 PM

Hey bro! Thanks a lot for this. hehehehhehehe and the comment!!!
It is not til I compare it like this to see how far I have gone. the length of this journey.
Thanks man!

JoseVega · 11-26-2012, 02:20 PM

hey mike! thanks a lot! yeah i still need to play around some of this stuff! still not happy with it!
Thanks man!

malo · 11-28-2012, 03:28 PM

Hey bro!

great updates! Lovin' the unapproved sketch!
Hmm - think for the sketch it would be nice to have a figure in it. Just to get a sense of scale. other than that I LIKE

And have to agree with Heri

Cheers and take care

Torres-PT · 11-29-2012, 09:38 AM

Loving the Naruto paintings

Nice to see someone from Team Aweosome around here

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Sorknes Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 538 Senior Member Thanks: 172 Thanked 254 Times in 184 Posts	11-09-2012, 10:22 AM Whoa, your latest stuff looks really, really good. Love the waterfalls, even though I kind of think I liked it purplish even more. And that last one is stunningly full of action, good work sir! __________________ CGHUB Sketchbook Sorknes Art Blog Facebook

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,015 Member My Mood: Thanks: 495 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	Wip3 11-13-2012, 05:00 AM Hey Sorkness thanks a lot! WIP-3 Still working it in between work! Could not leave it alone! I know its been forever __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,015 Member My Mood: Thanks: 495 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	Chidori 11-13-2012, 03:19 PM Just another Fan art of Naruto.... Finally Done I hope you like __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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malo Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 2,978 Senior Member Thanks: 1,711 Thanked 1,852 Times in 1,556 Posts	11-14-2012, 01:01 PM Hey Jose, looking pretty gooooood, mate!! Great colors and action going on here. Some suggestions (if its OK for you)… I'd love to see the char one left side a bit more pop out. Maybe some brighter values or a bit of rim light. The huge shadow on the "wall� could be a bit harder (imo). other than that - you did a great job and you still improving a lot. And besides that - hope all is well on your side. Cheers __________________ malos sketchbook

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mjasnowski Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 1,394 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 1,508 Thanked 532 Times in 528 Posts	11-14-2012, 07:43 PM Great job on the Naruto piece!! I agree with Markus, some of the lighting could use some tweaks. Compositionally I'm not 100% sure what is happening, is something breaking in? Out? Is the guy on the left in the bubble doing that to the wall? Keep pushing it! __________________ mike jasnowski Prints

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irawan Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 991 Senior Member Thanks: 496 Thanked 853 Times in 561 Posts	11-14-2012, 09:09 PM really great job on the color and rendering, it would be really great if the view of him/naruto is not really from the backside, a litle bit from the side i thing is not bad idea, since his position on the composition is more into the left side then in the middle. keep it rocking!!

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,015 Member My Mood: Thanks: 495 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	Chibaku Tensei 11-23-2012, 12:41 AM hey guys, thanks a lot for the comments! i appreciate it! This fan art pieces im really just kinda going for fun with this, experiencing some of the events in the story.... @marcus - thanks man! yah i was debating on that since he is inside that thing, not much light is going in so i was not sure @mike - hey, ummm the left guy is gonna be guarding from another guy coming with the electricity..... @ira - i agree... its a good point that he is on the left side instead of the middle.... thanks ok her eis another fun one FAN ART Pain vs Naruto CHIBAKU TENSEI __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,015 Member My Mood: Thanks: 495 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	Unapproved sketch developed 11-26-2012, 02:49 AM Developed an unapproved sketch. A bit stuck here... Not sure if I should add a figure or something... what u guys think? __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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irawan Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 991 Senior Member Thanks: 496 Thanked 853 Times in 561 Posts	11-26-2012, 01:41 PM hi jose, mai 2011, the last updates compare to your worked one year ago. man......you are awesome!!!

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mjasnowski Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 1,394 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 1,508 Thanked 532 Times in 528 Posts	11-26-2012, 02:16 PM Agree with Heri, you've come alooong way!! Keep pushing it! __________________ mike jasnowski Prints

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mjasnowski Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 1,394 Senior Member My Mood: Thanks: 1,508 Thanked 532 Times in 528 Posts	11-26-2012, 02:18 PM Latest is looking really good, maybe add some splashes of colors, flags, etc.. Figure or two might help also. Maybe play with some contrast in places, values feel a bit the same overall. __________________ mike jasnowski Prints

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,015 Member My Mood: Thanks: 495 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	11-26-2012, 02:19 PM Hey bro! Thanks a lot for this. hehehehhehehe and the comment!!! It is not til I compare it like this to see how far I have gone. the length of this journey. Thanks man! __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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JoseVega Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 2,015 Member My Mood: Thanks: 495 Thanked 892 Times in 830 Posts	11-26-2012, 02:20 PM hey mike! thanks a lot! yeah i still need to play around some of this stuff! still not happy with it! Thanks man! __________________ Portfolio : Sketchbook : Tumblr : Facebook : New World Challenges iarte7@gmail.com

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malo Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 2,978 Senior Member Thanks: 1,711 Thanked 1,852 Times in 1,556 Posts	11-28-2012, 03:28 PM Hey bro! great updates! Lovin' the unapproved sketch! Hmm - think for the sketch it would be nice to have a figure in it. Just to get a sense of scale. other than that I LIKE And have to agree with Heri Cheers and take care __________________ malos sketchbook

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Torres-PT Join Date: Oct 2012 Posts: 7 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	11-29-2012, 09:38 AM Loving the Naruto paintings Nice to see someone from Team Aweosome around here

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