[SkorpionOfficial]

Hi, I'm a young french animator, and I just made my first project with Flash Pro 8. I put the youtube link here, tell me what you think about it and how I can improve. I'm making a new one now !

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K_psG-TKKis (YT link or URL function doesn't work sorry)

Don't hesitate to comment and rate, like or dislike, doesn't a matter, I must know if it's good You can sub too if you want to see the next

Thanks for watching and telling me what's wrong and positive.


(I'm searching now an enterprise to continue my formation so I must do my best to convince them !)

[ARASH-HUMAN]

Hi Friend.

I work several years in most of the 2D animation fields. so I decide to answer your question.
I Watched your animation, I think it has a good structure, good beginning and good ending.And also it is clear that you have a good understanding of motion physics.
It is a good experience, But too simple.
I think you should put some of your works and drawings here ,so people can help you better, I checked your gallery but it was empty.
But for continuation of your way in animation you should decide about your interests, For example you like to work on character animation or what?
If u clear your perspective of animation for me, Maybe I can help you better.

[Nicolay]

Have to admit ... I love it!

- As been said, there is a great sense of physics and the eccentric movement gives them all character.

- Pace is good, not a split second of waiting for it to get a move on.

- While I understand most of what is going on, there is still enough mystery, food for thought ... so to speak.

- Good choice of music. Adds to the pace but without making it too frentic.

- There are some good camera angles, that mix well with the purely 2D perspectives.

- The black background is suitable, as this is about individual photons (?) but here I would suggest adding a little more ... even if it goes against the initial concept a bit. The BBC logo with the expanding circles is a good example ... a bit more colour / gradients would be great.

- You did add some lens flare, but since this is about light, I would have added more. Subtle ones, but definitely noticeable.

Regardless, this animation shows great story telling, has many endearing qualities and was real fun to watch.

Good stuff!

[LadyShanta16]

I love your animation. It was so colorful and bright. As the first replier said, it was too simple. Still great though.