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    Default WIP - Zombie Bomber

    11-10-2012, 11:18 AM






    I need some feedback. What do you feel its not right?

    Comment pls

    Bigger Rez -
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      11-10-2012, 05:50 PM

      Looks pretty sweet dude! One thing I can suggest is to push your brights a little bit more, all you values look mid range but try try to avoid using pure black and pure white.
      Keep it up!
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        11-10-2012, 07:20 PM

        Update:

        Some details and more light.
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          11-11-2012, 12:46 PM

          Greatwork bro!!!
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            11-11-2012, 07:51 PM

            you brights are looking good! Now I would work on your edge's and your dark's. the edge of the shirt over the belly looks a little bit muddy.

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