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    Red face Wandering mutant bard


    Hey guys,

    This is pretty much done for me, but i know there's something not quite right with it and i was hoping fresh eyes would help spot it...

    Is it the values? the lighting? the pose? it just seems off and dead... there's no flow.

    This is supposed to be a bard from a post apocalyptic world. he plays the bagpipes (or something like it) and defends himself by releasing noxious fumes.

    If you guys wanna see the pencil drawing for comparison of this its in my gallery.



    Anyone able to shed some light and tell me what i can do better next time?
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