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sachab · 06-24-2012, 02:30 PM

Hey all,
I'm trying to work up a scene but I'm just trowing out this guy first to get any suggestions.
Constructive comments appreciated!
SachaB
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kraemology · 06-26-2012, 10:47 PM

The rendering is nice and there are enough details that I spent a minute just examining the image. The pose bugs me though. It looks very stiff and unnatural. His expression also seems off. Considering how far you've already rendered the image I doubt that's what you want to hear, but it's something I noticed so thought I'd point it out. Ciao

amileduan · 06-27-2012, 02:31 AM

The upper body of the charavter is good,like the details.But the lower body seems a little rough,you finished it in a limited time,don't you?

sachab · 06-27-2012, 02:10 PM

Thanks for the feedback,
So I eventually ended up with this.
I hope it works over all. Alot of elements to balance really...
Hopefully it's engaging.
S

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sachab Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 10 Member Thanks: 5 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Orc 06-24-2012, 02:30 PM Hey all, I'm trying to work up a scene but I'm just trowing out this guy first to get any suggestions. Constructive comments appreciated! SachaB

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kraemology Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 12 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	06-26-2012, 10:47 PM The rendering is nice and there are enough details that I spent a minute just examining the image. The pose bugs me though. It looks very stiff and unnatural. His expression also seems off. Considering how far you've already rendered the image I doubt that's what you want to hear, but it's something I noticed so thought I'd point it out. Ciao

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amileduan Join Date: Feb 2012 Posts: 286 Senior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 46 Times in 44 Posts	06-27-2012, 02:31 AM The upper body of the charavter is good,like the details.But the lower body seems a little rough,you finished it in a limited time,don't you? __________________ render farm--cloud rendering--2,000 servers,24 hours* 7 days render

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sachab Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 10 Member Thanks: 5 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	End picture 06-27-2012, 02:10 PM Thanks for the feedback, So I eventually ended up with this. I hope it works over all. Alot of elements to balance really... Hopefully it's engaging. S Attached Thumbnails

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