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    Default Wild Love - Bolo Walk cycle


    Hi People! Finally I finished render of Bolo character from Wild Love short movie. Sebastian Kalemba was responsible for animation.
    Hope you will enjoy!

    https://vimeo.com/44672709

    http://wildloveshort.blogspot.com/
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      Hey it's seems like a really nice idea so far
      I just have some suggestions.
      Although it might be a comic character the ear seems to be wrong attached to the body. It's far to low and should be about the same height as the eyes.
      The texture of the face has some nice touches where the beard should be. Although it's not disturbing it might be more suitable for a cave man not to have a freshly shaved beard. make it wilder. Same goes for the cheeks I would love to see some red thones there and some dirt on the other parts of his body. This would add a lot more story to the character.

      The basics of the walk cycle are very nice but it mises a lot of secondary motions. Why is only his left arm moving.
      Also his cloth seems to static for that rough walking he does.
      Same goes for the nose ( you might have some motion there but it's not visible enough) .

      hope this was helpfull.
      Curious how this wil evolve
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        Thanks Man for your suggestions, I`ll keep in mind what you wrote, when I will render final movie
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          I like it a lot...I love how much character is showed in the walk...I dont mind low ears... I think it adds up to how funny character is...


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