CG-Hub

Akeiron · 04-07-2012, 11:38 PM

Very good! I'm not the best when it comes to composition, so take my advice for what it is... There's a problem with the lights on the cliff behind the focal point, they're conflicting with the figure's silhouette so I'd suggest to get rid of them at least on that spot... also the ones farther in the distance look too regular, remember they should follow the cliff's profile, instead now they're all straight. Just my 2 cents

shilo · 04-08-2012, 07:54 PM

Thanks Akeiron!

irawan · 04-15-2012, 08:12 PM

hi shilo,
i did quick paintover for you.

Name: shilo.jpg
Views: 0
Size: 243.0 KB

irawan · 04-15-2012, 08:29 PM

hi tekkoontan,
i hope thats help a bit.
Name: tekkoontan.jpg
Views: 0
Size: 145.6 KB

tekkoontan · 04-16-2012, 02:03 AM

ah yes, i was struggling with how to pose the tail. now you did it like this, i like it a lot. how come i never thought of that?

Kuro-san · 10:18 PM

Hi there, hope this thread is still visited.

started with an illustration but i have crazy problems with the left arm and the head, especially size and position... i keep trying different head-positions for hours but cant get body + arm in harmony with the head...

ah and i'm also looking for ideas in terms of her hair :P

thank you for helping!
here's the picture:

http://www.abload.de/image.php?img=n...ungle547x4.jpg

Acronius · 05:10 AM

Hi guys, this a concept I am working on for an advertising print of a beauty salon. It's really far in the working process but i have 3 and half more week to improve stuff. The thing is that I wanna inscribe It in a contestto get it exposed in a creative exposition at July, and hopefully land a Job and stop counting coins; so I need it to be more than perfect. This being said, I'll really appreciate the slightest feedback you can give me

.

pudsy · 06-07-2012, 02:45 PM

Hey guys I feel like I'm getting towards a real finished product with my portraits, but I think they are just lacking that final finished product look. If anyone can help I'd love to see how you would finish this picture... maybe some kind of filter or some more smoothing? I use Photoshop with a wacom tablet and mainly a round brush at low opacity building up the image in layers...

paulhpaulino · 06-07-2012, 08:38 PM

Hey guys! I'll be glad if anyone could give me a feedback about my comp

Thanks!

pudsy · 06-08-2012, 08:12 AM

It could be a lot more dynamic. Take a look at my quick sketch with a larger snake to give it more focus, more dramatic shadow on the little people to give them more attention and create more angles to make it less flat and more interesting.
Hope this helps...

paulhpaulino · 06-08-2012, 08:14 AM

Hey Man!

Thanks! You just open my eyes now

pudsy · 06-08-2012, 10:37 AM

You are welcome that's what this website's for

Glad I could be some help, sometimes you just need a fresh pair of eyes...

Alex_A · 06-17-2012, 04:28 AM

Here is a piece I have up in the 2d wip section I would really appreciate some advice, I know that the I'm having trouble conveying conniving texture surfaces.

Thanks!

ttarget · 06-22-2012, 04:30 PM

Hi everyone! I'm a new member and would love to get some pointers with this portrait. I worked very closely with a reference image because I want to work on realistic texturing and a more professional feel to my work. Any tips or guidance is much appreciated!

Reference:
images4.fanpop.com/image/photos/19400000/Jean-Grey-x-men-the-movie-19447873-1920-1200.jpg

Name: jean-grey-post.jpg
Views: 0
Size: 167.1 KB

Name: jean-grey-post.jpg
Views: 0
Size: 167.1 KB

gabrielabirchal · 06-22-2012, 09:47 PM

Hey guys, this thread is a great idea. I'm struggling with this piece, I gues it's mostly because my anatomy is still very weak and all. I could use some good critique here.

Thanks!

Name: ahri4.jpg
Views: 0
Size: 327.1 KB

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Email this Page
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode

Similar Threads
Thread	Thread Starter	Forum	Replies	Last Post
the DRAW FROM cghub faces thread - Open Thread	SCWatson	Lounge	9	01-24-2010 02:30 AM
Get Better Thread	joevriens	2D Drawing Jams	45	01-16-2009 02:39 AM

CG-Hub

Members login

General

Challenges

2D Corner

3D Corner

Medusa went to a beauty salon

Help with finishing off

Slythdeath's lair

Slythdeath's lair sketch

Site Map

	Permalink #481
Akeiron Join Date: Mar 2012 Posts: 2 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	04-07-2012, 11:38 PM Very good! I'm not the best when it comes to composition, so take my advice for what it is... There's a problem with the lights on the cliff behind the focal point, they're conflicting with the figure's silhouette so I'd suggest to get rid of them at least on that spot... also the ones farther in the distance look too regular, remember they should follow the cliff's profile, instead now they're all straight. Just my 2 cents

The Following User Says Thank You to Akeiron For This Useful Post:
shilo

	Permalink #482
shilo Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 17 Junior Member Thanks: 3 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	04-08-2012, 07:54 PM Thanks Akeiron!

	Permalink #483
irawan Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 1,005 Senior Member Thanks: 501 Thanked 873 Times in 577 Posts	04-15-2012, 08:12 PM hi shilo, i did quick paintover for you.

	Permalink #484
irawan Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 1,005 Senior Member Thanks: 501 Thanked 873 Times in 577 Posts	04-15-2012, 08:29 PM hi tekkoontan, i hope thats help a bit.

The Following User Says Thank You to irawan For This Useful Post:
tekkoontan

	Permalink #485
tekkoontan Join Date: Apr 2012 Posts: 25 Member Thanks: 2 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	04-16-2012, 02:03 AM ah yes, i was struggling with how to pose the tail. now you did it like this, i like it a lot. how come i never thought of that?

	Permalink #486
Kuro-san Join Date: Feb 2011 Posts: 2 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	05-28-2012, 09:48 PM Hi there, hope this thread is still visited. started with an illustration but i have crazy problems with the left arm and the head, especially size and position... i keep trying different head-positions for hours but cant get body + arm in harmony with the head... ah and i'm also looking for ideas in terms of her hair :P thank you for helping! here's the picture: http://www.abload.de/image.php?img=n...ungle547x4.jpg Attached Thumbnails Last edited by Kuro-san; 05-28-2012 at 10:18 PM.

	Permalink #487
Acronius Join Date: Feb 2012 Posts: 9 Junior Member Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Medusa went to a beauty salon 05-29-2012, 02:29 AM Hi guys, this a concept I am working on for an advertising print of a beauty salon. It's really far in the working process but i have 3 and half more week to improve stuff. The thing is that I wanna inscribe It in a contestto get it exposed in a creative exposition at July, and hopefully land a Job and stop counting coins; so I need it to be more than perfect. This being said, I'll really appreciate the slightest feedback you can give me . Last edited by Acronius; 06-02-2012 at 05:10 AM.

	Permalink #488
pudsy Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 4 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Help with finishing off 06-07-2012, 02:45 PM Hey guys I feel like I'm getting towards a real finished product with my portraits, but I think they are just lacking that final finished product look. If anyone can help I'd love to see how you would finish this picture... maybe some kind of filter or some more smoothing? I use Photoshop with a wacom tablet and mainly a round brush at low opacity building up the image in layers... Attached Thumbnails

Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)

	Permalink #489
paulhpaulino Join Date: Apr 2012 Posts: 16 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Slythdeath's lair 06-07-2012, 08:38 PM Hey guys! I'll be glad if anyone could give me a feedback about my comp Thanks!

	Permalink #490
pudsy Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 4 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Slythdeath's lair sketch 06-08-2012, 08:12 AM It could be a lot more dynamic. Take a look at my quick sketch with a larger snake to give it more focus, more dramatic shadow on the little people to give them more attention and create more angles to make it less flat and more interesting. Hope this helps... Attached Thumbnails

	Permalink #491
paulhpaulino Join Date: Apr 2012 Posts: 16 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	06-08-2012, 08:14 AM Hey Man! Thanks! You just open my eyes now

	Permalink #492
pudsy Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 4 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	06-08-2012, 10:37 AM You are welcome that's what this website's for Glad I could be some help, sometimes you just need a fresh pair of eyes...

	Permalink #493
Alex_A Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 103 Member Thanks: 2 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts	06-17-2012, 04:28 AM Here is a piece I have up in the 2d wip section I would really appreciate some advice, I know that the I'm having trouble conveying conniving texture surfaces. Thanks!

	Permalink #494
ttarget Join Date: Jun 2012 Posts: 12 Junior Member Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	06-22-2012, 04:30 PM Hi everyone! I'm a new member and would love to get some pointers with this portrait. I worked very closely with a reference image because I want to work on realistic texturing and a more professional feel to my work. Any tips or guidance is much appreciated! Reference: images4.fanpop.com/image/photos/19400000/Jean-Grey-x-men-the-movie-19447873-1920-1200.jpg

	Permalink #495
gabrielabirchal Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 19 Member Thanks: 3 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	06-22-2012, 09:47 PM Hey guys, this thread is a great idea. I'm struggling with this piece, I gues it's mostly because my anatomy is still very weak and all. I could use some good critique here. Thanks!