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Just Another Day - Short Funny Animation!!
06-02-2012, 12:31 AM
Hello I am helping my friends share there short animation!
James bown, Liam Reynolds, Michael Wilde have just finished our short animation and would like to share it with you.
View The Film Here! https://vimeo.com/43202339
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07-19-2012, 11:43 AM
Over all a nice piece of work.
I woudl suggest you shoudl overdo it a bit more with the emotions in the faceanimation and body animation. It#s sometimes not clear what the characters feelings are.
Therefore I can higly recomend this book
Another thing I miss issome more depth of field. Especially in the street http://www.kapstadt.org/images/image...-street-6g.jpg
This is a good example that the houses that are further away get lighter.
The last thing might be the flow of the scenes. Work from the characters- not from the viewer view or knowledge.
Example: teh scene when he seems to get the idea of taking the bike. At the moment it seems like he first hasthe idea then sees th bike.
What about this: he looks frustrated up and down the road. - then his eyes detect the bike- make a shoot of how the character would see the bike- may be with a glow arround it. Like it's his heroic item of the day.
then a closeup of his eyes where the bike mirrors in it then a shoot where he recognises the other guy - then again his eyes that turn angry.
Hope this was somehow helpfull
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