Hey! That's a nice start , but your post is from like a month and a half ago.. why??

Go ahead and post more.If you want critique , don't ask people not to be too harsh. Deviantart has this kind of "pat on the back" policy , that I don't think is too healthy.Also when people give you critique , you don't have to follow it to the letter. They give you their opinions , so you can gather as much as you can and make up your own. The only critique you should take literally is your own. That's the most important one too. If you want to be able to do something , figure out what you're missing and how you have to get there on your own. "Critters" can't hold your hand all the way , they can only nudge you in the right direction and on occasion warn about a few bumps.
Just keep pushing on your own and you'll be absolutely fine! Take care ! I wish to see more of your stuff
