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    My name is james and I decided to start a sketchbook. I hope you take the time to look at some of my work and enjoy it. Any crits are welcome.

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        wow nice start! love your color chose especially the second one! only crit i have is maybe you could make it a little more apparent of what it actually is, for example i think the second one is a sort of environment but i could be wrong and it could actually be an abstract piece. anyways hope to see more posts!
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            Very interesting! Personally I'd like to see a bit of added detail so I can tell what things are a little easier, but maybe that's not what you want
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              @kevin- and Liffey: Thanks for the suggestions, they are much appreciated

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                environment wip

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                liking the warm colours in this pic
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                  Nice. I like how alien the enviros are, but in the last one especially it's still easy to tell what's going on. good stuff
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                    Nice start keep it up !
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                      @MrBrown,Liffey,Kherns: thank you

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                      any crits welcome
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                        Beautiful! I love the textures!
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                        Welcome to the hub!
                        Liking your colors and the style going! My only suggestion is that, hinting stuff is great but try to describe some elements on your pieces a little bit more? Good examples are the frog and the house with the kid walking in front of it : )

                        keep it up!
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                            @johnsilva - thanks for the suggestions


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