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EBU · 10:27 PM

Hi I am a new member to this site. This will be my first post.
I am amazed by the talent surrounding this forum, I feel unworthy yet inspired and motivated.

Anyway, here is a little piece I am working on. My goal is to make a Lowpoly Victorian style Creepy Headless lady.

Ive been working on this on and off, and here is my progress.
critiques are more than welcome.

I based my work on the image you see on the left (lady holding her head

currently Im in the Retopology proccess.

Zentrope · 05-16-2012, 07:19 AM

Welcome to CGHUB..
I have pointed out few things that you should look into..
In first, the Mesh looks lumpy and
in second, the topology flow should be well utilized..

To avoid lumps, try using the mesh till the optimum level and don't subdivide early. Smooth often.
And for topology, the flow should be according to the muscles and not going straight..

Rest is good and even the topology is well spaced...
so Keep working

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EBU · 05:47 PM

Thankyou Zentrope!
Ive changed the topology of the face.

Ive tried to make the flow better.
also added an edge loop to the eye for a natural blink in animation.
I will also edit the lump as you mentioned soon.
thanks!

Ive also gone ahead and finished the topology for the rest of the body.

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EBU Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 2 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	WIP Creepy Headless Lady 05-15-2012, 10:06 PM Hi I am a new member to this site. This will be my first post. I am amazed by the talent surrounding this forum, I feel unworthy yet inspired and motivated. Anyway, here is a little piece I am working on. My goal is to make a Lowpoly Victorian style Creepy Headless lady. Ive been working on this on and off, and here is my progress. critiques are more than welcome. I based my work on the image you see on the left (lady holding her head currently Im in the Retopology proccess. Last edited by EBU; 05-15-2012 at 10:27 PM.

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Zentrope Join Date: Apr 2011 Posts: 796 Moderator My Mood: Thanks: 43 Thanked 390 Times in 353 Posts	05-16-2012, 07:19 AM Welcome to CGHUB.. I have pointed out few things that you should look into.. In first, the Mesh looks lumpy and in second, the topology flow should be well utilized.. To avoid lumps, try using the mesh till the optimum level and don't subdivide early. Smooth often. And for topology, the flow should be according to the muscles and not going straight.. Rest is good and even the topology is well spaced... so Keep working

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EBU Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 2 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	05-18-2012, 05:42 PM Thankyou Zentrope! Ive changed the topology of the face. Ive tried to make the flow better. also added an edge loop to the eye for a natural blink in animation. I will also edit the lump as you mentioned soon. thanks! Ive also gone ahead and finished the topology for the rest of the body. Last edited by EBU; 05-18-2012 at 05:47 PM.

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