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    I've been practicing atmospheric perspective and plan old perspective. I still have a way to go, but I feel like I'm progressing.
    Crits are very welcome.
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      I think this is looking great, good sense of depth and the weather conditions are expressed really well.
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        Thanks yakuza! I tweaked it a bit, I wanted the poses to be stronger in the characters. Does it read better?
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          This image has a strong impact, clear readable characters and an interesting backdrop. I think you could have emphasized the character action more by choosing a low-angled perspective looking up at the characters rather than a mid point horizon. Something to think about for the next piece
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            thanks rich4rt!


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