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tekkoontan · 04-04-2012, 03:39 AM

hey guys, hope someone can help fix mine, i am self taught, and wanted to paint as good as Melanie Delon
thanks !!!

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Scratchisme · 04-06-2012, 10:39 AM

Thanks for the paint over and the link. I've been trying to copy some of the pictures for practice.

shilo · 10:52 PM

Hey guys, been practicing atmospheric perspective a lot lately. Hows it reading? One area i'm struggling in, specially with this piece, is the character forms reading, especially the human hanging over the cliff. Any help will be greatly appreciated

-this thread is awesome btw, great resource
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Akeiron · 04-07-2012, 11:38 PM

Very good! I'm not the best when it comes to composition, so take my advice for what it is... There's a problem with the lights on the cliff behind the focal point, they're conflicting with the figure's silhouette so I'd suggest to get rid of them at least on that spot... also the ones farther in the distance look too regular, remember they should follow the cliff's profile, instead now they're all straight. Just my 2 cents

shilo · 04-08-2012, 07:54 PM

Thanks Akeiron!

irawan · 04-15-2012, 08:12 PM

hi shilo,
i did quick paintover for you.

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irawan · 04-15-2012, 08:29 PM

hi tekkoontan,
i hope thats help a bit.
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tekkoontan · 04-16-2012, 02:03 AM

ah yes, i was struggling with how to pose the tail. now you did it like this, i like it a lot. how come i never thought of that?

Kuro-san · 10:18 PM

Hi there, hope this thread is still visited.

started with an illustration but i have crazy problems with the left arm and the head, especially size and position... i keep trying different head-positions for hours but cant get body + arm in harmony with the head...

ah and i'm also looking for ideas in terms of her hair :P

thank you for helping!
here's the picture:

http://www.abload.de/image.php?img=n...ungle547x4.jpg

Acronius · 05:10 AM

Hi guys, this a concept I am working on for an advertising print of a beauty salon. It's really far in the working process but i have 3 and half more week to improve stuff. The thing is that I wanna inscribe It in a contestto get it exposed in a creative exposition at July, and hopefully land a Job and stop counting coins; so I need it to be more than perfect. This being said, I'll really appreciate the slightest feedback you can give me

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pudsy · 06-07-2012, 02:45 PM

Hey guys I feel like I'm getting towards a real finished product with my portraits, but I think they are just lacking that final finished product look. If anyone can help I'd love to see how you would finish this picture... maybe some kind of filter or some more smoothing? I use Photoshop with a wacom tablet and mainly a round brush at low opacity building up the image in layers...

paulhpaulino · 06-07-2012, 08:38 PM

Hey guys! I'll be glad if anyone could give me a feedback about my comp

Thanks!

pudsy · 06-08-2012, 08:12 AM

It could be a lot more dynamic. Take a look at my quick sketch with a larger snake to give it more focus, more dramatic shadow on the little people to give them more attention and create more angles to make it less flat and more interesting.
Hope this helps...

paulhpaulino · 06-08-2012, 08:14 AM

Hey Man!

Thanks! You just open my eyes now

pudsy · 06-08-2012, 10:37 AM

You are welcome that's what this website's for

Glad I could be some help, sometimes you just need a fresh pair of eyes...

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tekkoontan Join Date: Apr 2012 Posts: 21 Junior Member Thanks: 2 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	04-04-2012, 03:39 AM hey guys, hope someone can help fix mine, i am self taught, and wanted to paint as good as Melanie Delon thanks !!!

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Scratchisme Join Date: Dec 2011 Posts: 6 Junior Member Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	04-06-2012, 10:39 AM Thanks for the paint over and the link. I've been trying to copy some of the pictures for practice.

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shilo Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 17 Junior Member Thanks: 3 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	04-07-2012, 10:47 PM Hey guys, been practicing atmospheric perspective a lot lately. Hows it reading? One area i'm struggling in, specially with this piece, is the character forms reading, especially the human hanging over the cliff. Any help will be greatly appreciated -this thread is awesome btw, great resource Last edited by shilo; 04-07-2012 at 10:52 PM.

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Akeiron Join Date: Mar 2012 Posts: 2 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	04-07-2012, 11:38 PM Very good! I'm not the best when it comes to composition, so take my advice for what it is... There's a problem with the lights on the cliff behind the focal point, they're conflicting with the figure's silhouette so I'd suggest to get rid of them at least on that spot... also the ones farther in the distance look too regular, remember they should follow the cliff's profile, instead now they're all straight. Just my 2 cents

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tekkoontan Join Date: Apr 2012 Posts: 21 Junior Member Thanks: 2 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	04-16-2012, 02:03 AM ah yes, i was struggling with how to pose the tail. now you did it like this, i like it a lot. how come i never thought of that?

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Kuro-san Join Date: Feb 2011 Posts: 2 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	05-28-2012, 09:48 PM Hi there, hope this thread is still visited. started with an illustration but i have crazy problems with the left arm and the head, especially size and position... i keep trying different head-positions for hours but cant get body + arm in harmony with the head... ah and i'm also looking for ideas in terms of her hair :P thank you for helping! here's the picture: http://www.abload.de/image.php?img=n...ungle547x4.jpg Attached Thumbnails Last edited by Kuro-san; 05-28-2012 at 10:18 PM.

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Acronius Join Date: Feb 2012 Posts: 9 Junior Member Thanks: 3 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Medusa went to a beauty salon 05-29-2012, 02:29 AM Hi guys, this a concept I am working on for an advertising print of a beauty salon. It's really far in the working process but i have 3 and half more week to improve stuff. The thing is that I wanna inscribe It in a contestto get it exposed in a creative exposition at July, and hopefully land a Job and stop counting coins; so I need it to be more than perfect. This being said, I'll really appreciate the slightest feedback you can give me . Last edited by Acronius; 06-02-2012 at 05:10 AM.

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pudsy Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 4 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Help with finishing off 06-07-2012, 02:45 PM Hey guys I feel like I'm getting towards a real finished product with my portraits, but I think they are just lacking that final finished product look. If anyone can help I'd love to see how you would finish this picture... maybe some kind of filter or some more smoothing? I use Photoshop with a wacom tablet and mainly a round brush at low opacity building up the image in layers... Attached Thumbnails

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paulhpaulino Join Date: Apr 2012 Posts: 16 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Slythdeath's lair 06-07-2012, 08:38 PM Hey guys! I'll be glad if anyone could give me a feedback about my comp Thanks!

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pudsy Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 4 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Slythdeath's lair sketch 06-08-2012, 08:12 AM It could be a lot more dynamic. Take a look at my quick sketch with a larger snake to give it more focus, more dramatic shadow on the little people to give them more attention and create more angles to make it less flat and more interesting. Hope this helps... Attached Thumbnails

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paulhpaulino Join Date: Apr 2012 Posts: 16 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	06-08-2012, 08:14 AM Hey Man! Thanks! You just open my eyes now

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pudsy Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 4 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	06-08-2012, 10:37 AM You are welcome that's what this website's for Glad I could be some help, sometimes you just need a fresh pair of eyes...