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RedRepublik · 05-11-2009, 03:16 AM

dude, the texture is sweet! i love the eyeball area now. when will you pose it?

Olegka · 05-11-2009, 07:32 AM

crazy idea, and great modeling man! The eye balls are selling really well, yea, ideas for the pose?

JacqueChoi · 03:16 AM

Heh heh heh!

Finally nailed the pose I think I like (Transpose RULES).

I think I'm happy with the lighting (but my Monitor at home sucks).

Crits and comments at this stage would be GREATLY appreciated.

JacqueChoi · 05:41 AM

spam spam spam!

Construction sheet:

Time consuming font (changing each letter) but at least it looks like it was pasted together by a serial killer.

(That 350kb upload limit is absolutely horrid).

alphacentauri85 · 05-17-2009, 09:22 PM

Your creature is pure greatness. The skin textures inspired me to try to pay a bit more attention to detail on mine. Something I noticed, though, was that the bracelets, belts, etc, look like they're superimposed rather than actually on the creature. Maybe it needs some projected shadow? and toning down of the saturation?
Also, the nails are a bit plain. I think it would add something if they looked all gritty and broken.

JacqueChoi · 05:43 AM

Thanks for the crit!!

concept sheet:

JacqueChoi · 05:45 AM

Texture Sheet Layout

uggh 50% Jpeg compression to get it to 350kb.

JacqueChoi · 05:46 AM

SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM!

Presentation Shot:

Now that I've pretty much have my "presentations" worked out. I'm going to go back, and bloody up that eyeball he's holding, and add some grit to those fingernails, and hopefully have time to re-render them, and throw them into my presentations.

Any other crits would be greatly appreciated!

Edit** Added Blood

JacqueChoi · 05:48 AM

Finals being submitted tomorrow.

Let me know if there's anything glaringly wrong about these:

Text:

Bluefley · 05-18-2009, 03:58 PM

looks awesome man, the blood makes it shine, maybe add some rust/scratches on those metal rings, but other than that, wicked (:

RedRepublik · 05-19-2009, 03:58 AM

hell yeah! looks awesome jaque. great textures

BjornHurri · 05-19-2009, 07:37 AM

That is a great entry, the blood looks a bit milky/pink though.
Real blood is a lot darker and thicker (unless it is superficial bleeding)

Best of luck man!

Cheers
Bjorn.

wardevil85 · 06-04-2009, 01:53 PM

Awesome work... Very original design and the presentation is clean & consistent

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	Permalink #46
RedRepublik Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 156 Member My Mood: Thanks: 0 Thanked 32 Times in 25 Posts	05-11-2009, 03:16 AM dude, the texture is sweet! i love the eyeball area now. when will you pose it? __________________ website

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Olegka Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 3 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	05-11-2009, 07:32 AM crazy idea, and great modeling man! The eye balls are selling really well, yea, ideas for the pose?

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JacqueChoi Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 84 Member My Mood: Thanks: 1 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	05-16-2009, 04:55 AM Heh heh heh! Finally nailed the pose I think I like (Transpose RULES). I think I'm happy with the lighting (but my Monitor at home sucks). Crits and comments at this stage would be GREATLY appreciated. __________________ Jacque Choi Lead Character Artist Eidos Montreal - Thief 4 Brawl Entry Last edited by jox; 05-20-2009 at 03:16 AM.

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JacqueChoi Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 84 Member My Mood: Thanks: 1 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	05-17-2009, 07:50 PM spam spam spam! Construction sheet: Time consuming font (changing each letter) but at least it looks like it was pasted together by a serial killer. (That 350kb upload limit is absolutely horrid). Attached Thumbnails __________________ Jacque Choi Lead Character Artist Eidos Montreal - Thief 4 Brawl Entry Last edited by jox; 05-20-2009 at 05:41 AM.

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alphacentauri85 Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 51 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	05-17-2009, 09:22 PM Your creature is pure greatness. The skin textures inspired me to try to pay a bit more attention to detail on mine. Something I noticed, though, was that the bracelets, belts, etc, look like they're superimposed rather than actually on the creature. Maybe it needs some projected shadow? and toning down of the saturation? Also, the nails are a bit plain. I think it would add something if they looked all gritty and broken. __________________ break yourself, foo!

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JacqueChoi Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 84 Member My Mood: Thanks: 1 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	05-17-2009, 09:48 PM Thanks for the crit!! concept sheet: Attached Thumbnails __________________ Jacque Choi Lead Character Artist Eidos Montreal - Thief 4 Brawl Entry Last edited by jox; 05-20-2009 at 05:43 AM.

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JacqueChoi Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 84 Member My Mood: Thanks: 1 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	05-18-2009, 03:15 AM Texture Sheet Layout uggh 50% Jpeg compression to get it to 350kb. Attached Thumbnails __________________ Jacque Choi Lead Character Artist Eidos Montreal - Thief 4 Brawl Entry Last edited by jox; 05-20-2009 at 05:45 AM.

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JacqueChoi Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 84 Member My Mood: Thanks: 1 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	05-18-2009, 03:40 AM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM! Presentation Shot: Now that I've pretty much have my "presentations" worked out. I'm going to go back, and bloody up that eyeball he's holding, and add some grit to those fingernails, and hopefully have time to re-render them, and throw them into my presentations. Any other crits would be greatly appreciated! Edit Added Blood Attached Thumbnails __________________ Jacque Choi** Lead Character Artist Eidos Montreal - Thief 4 Brawl Entry Last edited by jox; 05-20-2009 at 05:46 AM.

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JacqueChoi Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 84 Member My Mood: Thanks: 1 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	05-18-2009, 07:09 AM Finals being submitted tomorrow. Let me know if there's anything glaringly wrong about these: Text: Attached Thumbnails __________________ Jacque Choi Lead Character Artist Eidos Montreal - Thief 4 Brawl Entry Last edited by jox; 05-20-2009 at 05:48 AM.

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Bluefley Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 3 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	05-18-2009, 03:58 PM looks awesome man, the blood makes it shine, maybe add some rust/scratches on those metal rings, but other than that, wicked (:

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RedRepublik Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 156 Member My Mood: Thanks: 0 Thanked 32 Times in 25 Posts	05-19-2009, 03:58 AM hell yeah! looks awesome jaque. great textures __________________ website

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BjornHurri Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 190 Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 60 Times in 42 Posts	05-19-2009, 07:37 AM That is a great entry, the blood looks a bit milky/pink though. Real blood is a lot darker and thicker (unless it is superficial bleeding) Best of luck man! Cheers Bjorn.

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wardevil85 Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 2 Junior Member Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	06-04-2009, 01:53 PM Awesome work... Very original design and the presentation is clean & consistent